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Please do not respond to critiques. If I see any more back and forth snipes, I am locking this thread. To me, I would probably not like this poem, just ...

Haha, if your letters and words can create so much, why create this? ;) This is a bit bland for poetry. I mean, you could talk about streams of words ...

Hi! First of all, I rated your work G. So now it has a chance to be on the front page and seen by hundreds of people an hour. Cool, ...

Haha, oh dear! This is going to end badly. XD I mean, she'll probably end up befriending the poor girl she's supposed to torture, and her evil mother would be ...

Psh, you suck, lol. This is a lovely beginning. It starts just like a fairy tale and it's oh so cute! And I want to read more. But noooooo, you ...

iHola y bienvenidos a YWS! :D This poem is definitely interesting! I like the image of flying that you gave and then the subsequent cutting off the wings. It tied ...

Okay, this is TOTALLY going to an MTV critique (sorry about that!) but here we go! I though the ending was really weak. And this is mostly because you have ...

I'm locking this. It's site policy to post for others, so that kind of sucks, but site policy is site policy, no? ^^ If your friend wants reviews or comments, ...

Eek! *flattered* I don't really want to comment on the style of the poem, just because I'm afraid I'm too biased, being completely obsessed with this site, you know? ;) ...

Yeah. It's obvious that this is a rough draft. Right now, it's an underdeveloped pseudo-story of a couple of snapshots of several scenes that really have no congruity with each ...

This looks like a couple of beginnings I wrote while trying to come up with the best beginning for my new novel. Typically, I write several dozen beginnings, and as ...

Hey Jasmine! So, I'm looking at your stuff, and it's quite interesting! Fang-bangers? It sounds like a really kinky term, but it also sounds sooo true, if that's what they ...

Um... yeah. I tend to critique contest entries really lately. ^^ However! This was cool. :) Two things first: "Oh my God, is he dead."

Okay, so you asked me to critique your poem, so I did it! Unfortunately, it's a video critique, which means I play with toys, babble on about Magic Pony, and ...

Oooh! This is pretty! :D This critique is TOTALLY not going to make any sense because it's three o'clock in the morning and my brain is fried, but I just ...