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Hello! I want to share a poem for you that is totally a Black History poem! Maybe it'll spark your imagination to see great poetry in action! Ballad Of Birmingham ...

I think you should just start with the first chapter. :) I think, in general, most writers think they need a prologue to introduce things that their readers "might miss" ...

Hey, Grinion! :D So! This poem, for the most part, sounded pretty. But it really didn't have much substance to it. The main plot line of the poem is a ...

Hey Timmy! :D Right now, these poems kind of remind me of the psalms (bible thing, if you're not familiar with it). That's not a bad thing, but there's a ...

Leanna! First of all, I thought this was an adorable story! I really liked it a lot. A couple of ideas for you, if you wanted to alter it slightly... ...

Jacke! :D When I tell you it's bad, you believe me and give up the project and stop writing entirely and when I tell you it's good, you don't believe ...

Stewart's "Calculus: Early Transcendentals" Halliday, Resnick, and Walker's "Fundamentals of Physics." Like... I consult those two books waaaaay more than I would like to admit. And without those book

Hey Spike! :D I like these stanzas: As you and I walk along that many tred’d path, Those glorious powers play an eternal game of chess. What is yours is ...

Hey Queen! :D Ah, love and heartbreak! Don't we love them? Well... not really. Nice imagery that you used, about the haunting kiss and such. Some good stuff here! Now, ...

Oooh, nice! I like the rhyme. It helps keep that child-like feeling to it which makes this seem so poignant! Nitpicks! :) Grandma, you meant everything to me. I remember ...

IMP!!!!!!!!! Dude, this poem is teh awesome if only because it raised Imp from the dead. Since, clearly, this poem was the only thing that could do it... one more ...

Hey Vanadis! This was pretty fantastic! What can I say? Odes to thermodynamic properties are always awesome... I think. I especially like the allusion to nuclear engineering when you say ...

Hey Leza! The main thing here is that you introduce a bunch of ideas (like feeling old, the cold sea) but you don't really expand on those ideas at all. ...

Hey Toasty O's! Nice poem! I liked it very much, so you're definitely getting a star! The main criticism is that there is so much going on in the painting, ...

Hey Kelcia! Old-timey poetry? I'm totally in! I like the descriptions and stuff... it reminds me of what little I've seen of medieval times and the like. Awesome? Yes! The ...