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Re: The Wizards and the Desk Pets 1-the stolen magic-chapter 3
Hello! I am back for more... who is going to steal Cheyenne's magic??? WE SHALL FIND OUT THIS MYSTERY SOON!!!! She started walking towards the door very quickly, and said: ...
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Re: The Wizards and the desk pets 1: The stolen magic-chapters 1,&2
Okay, so I haven't read Accidental Magic! BUT. I saw this chapter sitting idly and figured I would read this! :) She got angry, and well- Boom. The guilty one ...
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Re: Bubblegum
Hi Summer! :) This is definitely some new imagery that I've encountered! Bubblegum is so sticky and makes it harder to speak. Plus, if you swallow it wrong, it can ...
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Re: "Struggling Life of a Mother"
Noooooo! This whole poem is painting motherhood as a type of martyrdom with only endless suffering. But that is absolutely not the case! Being a mother is awesome, trust me. ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 10.2
Speaking of the ex-hero… Sunny glanced over at him again, but he was still dozing in the same position. I don't know... again, unless there's a really really really good ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 10.1
...are you tired of reading these generic hello messages yet??? XD ONTO THE REVIEW. Jasper stared at Sunny and her thick reference book. Then, maybe sensing that she was serious ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 9.2
Okay! Straight to the review, wooooo! She surveyed the errors around her. They stood there, motionless except for the streams of red text that flowed around them. Okay, but why ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 9.1
Hi! Okay, let's just dive into the review, shall we??? As Sunny approached the In-N-Out, she half-expected it to keep moving away from her like some strangely complex mirage. But ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 8.2
Hi! So, I am going to attempt to finish your book this review day... it kind of amuses me. I usually review your chapters when it is either review day ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 8.1
Hello again! :) "Let's go, Robert! We're almost to the climax of our quest!" Sunny grinned at the robot, who reluctantly floated up out of his seat. But she hasn't ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 7.2
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiii! “Hm?” Robert cracked an eye open. “I was trying to nap. MY MAN. Okay, so...I think you can definitely do more introspection work on Sunny's thoughts regarding Jasper. Like, ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 7.1
Hello again!!! It looked like a couple of trains were leaving as well, carrying armor to different parts of Javaland, as shown through the large label "suitsOfArmor" on the side ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 6.2
As soon as Sunny stepped into the factory building, she was hit by a wave of sound. Various machines were whirring and pounding away, and workers in colorful suits of ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 6.1
"Oh, definitely. You wouldn't believe that extraneous code, always clogging up the air. Thankfully, all that useless code can be recycled, although it is pricier. And as for climate change… ...
Jan 29, 2023 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 5.2
Hi again!!! Is it... conditional Robert time??? Omg, autocorrect turned that from river to Robert. OH WELL. It amuses me too much to fix... If Robert had eyebrows, he'd be ...
Jan 29, 2023
