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This poem is soooo good! I love the picture it paints and i especially like the ending of you leaving. Very powerful. Share the talent hun :)

Thanks Nixie and Butterfinger! Your tips made a lot of sense to me and i'll use those to make changes for the better.

Great work sis! You always succeed in blowing me away :)

Oh my gosh! This is soooo awesome! I read to my brother and he and i laughed together. You sure are talented so keep up the fantastic work kid.

Wow. This made me want to reach out to you and help you find what you're looking for. Well done!

Bravo! This poem gave me goose bumps. I absolutely loved it and can't wait to read more of your work!

Absatootly fabulous! You are bursting with talent girly!

Yikes. This is loaded with awesomeness! Breakups are rough and you captured the emotions we all feel perfectly in writing.

Wowzers. I must admit to getting the creepy-crawly's as i read this. You've got quite the chunk of talent kid. Stay sharp!

Hmmm. Bridle your passions within your writing and you will achieve much better flow.

I love how you write. There is a lot of passion in this poem.

This is so sweet and romantic..you sure have a talent with poetry kid. I'd love to read more!

You're work gave me warm fuzzy's!

I really like this poem..share the talent kid!

Very cool. I haven't run into one like this before. I like it!