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  • Other » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A walk to be cherished!

    Hello, and WELCOME TO YWS! :D If you have any questions about the site, feel free to ask me! I'll give you my best answer! :D Anyway, on with the ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Bundle of Flowers ~ Chapter 4

    Hi! :D Snazzy here for a review! I haven't read any previous chapters, so I won't be able to help much with overall plot and stuff, although I'll do my ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 1

    Hi marmalade! :D Snazzy here for a review! Norah tried to remember things and slowly she did. This seems a bit, off , and I'm not exactly sure why. Maybe ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: incomplete

    Hello there! :D Well, it seems there isn't much to be reviewed here, but I'll give it my best shot! Incomplete means not "full or finished", like if I turned ...

    Sep 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: ​Chapter 2- Team Bonding…..Of Sorts

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! :D The stealth jet whizzed across the landscape while inside, Katelyn practiced her powers, shooting blasts of energy at targets, while thinking about her ...

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: To Be a Dragonry Pt 1

    Hello Dibidub, and welcome to YWS! Snazzy here for a review! :D Searing pain bolted through Fael’s body and he convulsed on himself. Convulsed means "to suffer violent involuntary contraction ...

    Sep 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 6

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! I don't have anything specific about this, but I do have some general ideas I wanted to make mention of, most of them having ...

    Sep 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Diminishing of Sanity: Chapters 2-3

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! :D First off, I do like the idea. I don't know - I've always liked the idea of traveling to escape something, and a ...

    Sep 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Humor Re: Skyfall

    Hello! First of all, pretty good job for maintaining the same sort of humor the entire story. This actually reminds me of a Shel Silverstein poem, (wow, how unpredictable of ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 6

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review (trying to catch up for RevMo... :D )! Anyway, let's dive right in, shall we? "That's our cue," Ethav muttered. He turned his heavy ...

    Sep 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Night of the Black Moon

    Hi felistia! :D Snazzy here for a review! All he had to do was bring back an emerald from the cave in the middle of the forest. I think the ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: LYGHT-Chapter 2

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! For the most part, this was really interesting! I was really on the edge of my seat during that last bit! Anyway, let's dive ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: When a Bird Sings Chapter 6

    Hello! :D First off, I must say, I don't read a lot of romance. At all. But I found myself intrigued by your title (and description), and as soon as ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Grimm:End Of time Chapter 1

    Hello! :D Good morning/afternoon/evening! Snazzy here for a review! As Samk642 already mentioned, the biggest mistake was grammar. Since it wasn't just in a couple of spots, I'm going to ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: Her Name is Kindness

    Hello! First off, YES! :D This is beautifully written, and a wonderful meaningful message! Anyway, time for the (rather short) review! She stands there, smiling beautifully, and out she holds ...

    Aug 29, 2016


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World