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Hello there!
Well, it seems there isn't much to be reviewed here, but I'll give it my best shot!
Incomplete means not "full or finished", like if I turned in an essay with a title, an introductory paragraph, a body paragraph, but not a conclusion. So, it was started, but not finished, therefore being incomplete. Therefore, I believe that "incomplete" is somewhat misleading as the title. However, words such as "pending", or "unresolved" I think would fit better - they almost mean the exact same thing as "incomplete", but I just feel they are "less-misleading".
Anyway, I do like how you left "incomplete" not capitalized. It gives us the sort of feel that this work will be really dramatic, and artistic, or deep and emotional, and when we actually open the work, we get this!
Overall, I do not really know what to think of it... I've seen several of these on YWS, so it's not necessarily original, but I can't really criticize it much at the same time. Anyway, keep writing!
~Snazzy
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