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Hello! :) This is wonderful! :D Very well written! I only have one little nitpick... "What she thinks about it, What have I done wrong?" I think maybe the second ...

Hello! :) This is, haunting. Not haunting....just...I'm sorry. :D I can't think of the right word right now... :D Anyway...this rocks. :D :D I liked how you used a lot ...

Hello! :D This is only my second review in about a forgive me if this is a little...bad. :D Anyway...let's begin, shall we? :D First off, this is a wonderful ...

Hello! :D This is my first review in WEEKS! So I'm sorry if it's a little...bad. :D Anyway, at the beginning of the story, I was wondering why the mood ...

Hello! :) This is a very nice poem! :) I only have a couple of nitpicks- "rain makes no noise without something for it to hit against." I think Rain ...

Hello! :D Wonderful job on this! :D HILARIOUS!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D Great job! :) I only have one tiny nitpick... "You're a half cat, half Pop Tart ...

Hello! :) This is pretty neat! :) I have left little notes for me while doing my notes for school.....and it's always fun to receive a letter from your "past ...

Hello! :D This is hilarious! :) I love it! I like how you had the other voice italisized, it makes it a lot easier to read. I really thought the ...

Hello! :D :) This is wonderful. :) :D Fabulous job! :D :D :D I really couldn't find anything big to correct in this. :D "You came to break all the ...

Hello! :D Great job on this! :) I love it! I did find a few grammar errors, but since you said that you were already going to fix those, I'll ...

Hello! :) Usually I don't read a lot of romance....but when I do, I normally love it! :) Great job on this! :D You really wrapped it up in the ...

Hello! :D I thought this was wonderfully written! :D It really is beautiful! :) I couldn't find anything to correct. I've never really thought how God feels whenever someone dies, ...

Hello! :D This is really funny! :) I could only find a couple of nitpicks in this! :D "Groan! I wish that I could go to school..." I think Groan, ...

Hello! :D I haven't read any of the previous chapters, but this seemed interesting, so I decided to check it out! :D I was right, this is interesting, and I ...

Hello! :D Well, here comes the super long review! :D :) This was chilling, very, VERY scary! :) Great job! :D Here are the corrections I found- In paragraph one, ...