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Re: Life as it should be
Hello there! :D Snazzy here for a review. :D I'm sorry if this is bad, because it is my second review in a LONG time, and when I say long, ...
May 9, 2015 -
Re: Heal The World
Hello there! :D So this is my first review in a very long time, and I'm trying to get back into the reviewing mood. ;) So I am REALLY sorry ...
May 9, 2015 -
Re: Ordadus- The Prologue (OLD)
Hello...again. :D After reading the first part of chapter six, I decided to start from the beginning. :) I thought it sounded really interesting, and maybe the rest would be ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter Six (Part One)
Hello! :) So, I've read @Biluata 's fabulous review, and I really couldn't find anything else! :D You did a great job correcting this! :) There are a couple of ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Dear Girl On The Train
Hello again! :D I really love this. I really, REALLY do! :D I only have one thing not mentioned from other fabulous writers! ;) "And Why did I not think ...
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: Don't Run With Scissors
Hello! :D This is hilarious! Truly HILARIOUS! :D I only have one little suggestion... "With a turn poorly planned, he proved cause for my worry." This seems a bit long, ...
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: Effective Goal-Setting for the Busy Teen
Hello! :D This is REALLY good! :D I like it! It looks like the things I was going to say were already mentioned by Biluata. :) I think it's really ...
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: Holy Effect
Hello! :D Snazzy here for a review! (I'm trying to get back into the swing of reviewing, so I'm sorry if this is a little bad. :D ) I only ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: idk first poem---not very good
Hello! :D Honestly, I think this is pretty good! Especially since it is your first poem! :) Most of the things I was going to point out were mentioned by ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Jean's Journal: Learn About Me!
Hello! :D I agree with Flash, I believe you need to write something that happened for it to be an actual prolugue. Though I do have a suggestion that could ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: Don't Go
Hello! :D Snazzy here for a review! :) First of all, I like this! It was (and still is) a very nice short story. :D Anyway...onto the nitpicks. :D "You ...
Mar 5, 2015 -
Re: In the Trees Kingdom Amongst the Moss
Hello! :D Snazzy here for a VERY short review. :D Great job on this! :) You use really good description in your stories. I just wanted to remind you that ...
Mar 5, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 3
Hello! :D Snazzy here for a review! :D (my first in a long time...) I haven't read any of the other chapters...yet. :) So I am a bit confused, but ...
Mar 5, 2015 -
Re: Crown Prince Derek and the Dragon
Hello! :D First of all, I think it's great that you want people to tear apart, and "kill" your story. :D :D (oops...I said something you did right... :D ) ...
Mar 4, 2015 -
Re: Not Fair
Hello! :) I REALLY loved this! :D It was a very touching subject, and you wrote it VERY well. :) I only have a couple of nitpicks- In about the ...
Feb 24, 2015