SmylinG

This was a very great opening chapter/prologue. I can honestly say there were few flaws in the flow of your writing and above all, it was very interesting to read ...

Of course, I agree with summerlove. Your stories are very interesting. Although, this chapter could have really been longer! :) But I do like how it ended. Ronnie running into ...

This was a crazy, beautiful, eratic, funny piece of writing. Made me smile :) That is all that matters! I give it two thumbs up. Fantastic job. Write more stuff ...

I think chapter 3 is my favorite so far. There's a lot more of that charming Marky in here. :) I find it funny how well you can switch from ...

This chapter was just as enthralling as the last. :) My only critique again would have to be the grammar and punctuation. And every now and then there's a minor ...

This was very cute and simple :) I liked it a lot, although I feel there is not much to go off of for a complete review. I merely have ...

I think this poem was a beautiful idea, but there were some flaws in your writing. Things that simply disrupted the flow of it. But I feel they were easily ...

This was unique. It had its own sort of special quality. It wasn't confusing to read or understand. I felt I was with you the entire time. It was a ...

This was a very creatively written little piece of work you have here :) I enjoyed reading the composition of your words, It all held my attention so well. Not ...

I agree with the reviewer above me. Does she have premonitions? If she does then that is way cool, and I've never really read anything that includes a main character ...

Oh my goodness.. This was by far one of the best things I've read on this site ever. Ingenious!! But need I say more? It seems you've been discovered by ...

Well, typically this isn't the kind of thing I enjoy reading, but it was actually okay. Leave it to a boy to write about war stuff, but you did a ...

I can tell perfectly by your writing that you have a very clear and special way of articulating yourself. I thought this piece here was great. You should continue adding ...

I like this a lot. Metaphorically it speaks to the audience. How faithful and patient some of us can all be when it comes to love. Romance and heartbreak come ...

This is a really great poem :) I love when people picture love so dark and beautiful as the way you did here. The only critique I have is you ...