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Wow.. I loved this. - Really loved this. It was so cleanly written, and your characters -so realistic. It was like reading something right off the shelf at a bookstore. ...

This is really great :) I loved your lyrics, but I was also curious to hear you sing them, so I looked you up on youtube. It was really sweet. ...

Very nice, Kafka ;) This poem is truly well written. I have no critique to give. You are simply a great writer. I loved how you constructed this poem. It ...

This was a really cool poem. I liked this a lot actually. :) I disagree with Blueras though. I understood your ending perfectly. I, a coward, Ran from you. Because ...

Overall, I think this was really sweet. But there are flaws with the set up in punctuation. Your glowing brown hair, A nd your ageless brown eyes. (I think you ...

Great poem here :) You did a great job with portraying your feelings. You poem was short and yet to the point. I really liked this part here: The edges ...

Don't worry CS. I got your back on the editing :) It's a tough one isn't it! I wouldn't worry about that though. This story is like the most perfect ...

Wow. A lot of reviews on this one, huh? I can see why. Your poem was epic. xP I like how you turned a crappy run in with the internet ...

This was a really sweet story you wrote. :) I feel like it shared a deeper meaning behind the whole coat thing. I like the part where you write, "I ...

Hello Jas :) Here to do that review you asked for. By the way, thanks for that. I'm truly flattered. You can beg for a review any day from me! ...

Hello CS :) Back to do a full review on this for you. Hopefully my editing helps and you like my suggestions. Of course I do not want to change ...

Wow, you're making it very hard to have just one favorite chapter. Now I have three more favorite chapters. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I loved how you ...

Hey, wonderful poem. :) I liked it a lot. It reminded me of something right out of my English book. I really love how you incorporated your heritage into it. ...

Hello :) Great poem you got here. I liked the message. I can see why you chose your username! I thought what you wrote was pretty cool. Although I'm not ...

Hey, me again :) This was a pretty good chapter two. Although, there were still many flaws when it came to grammar and punctuation and the whole past tense present ...