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Hi there! SlushySlapped here for a review! I'm just going to review as I go. All of the suggestions I make are just that. You are the author, dear, therefore ...

Hey! I'm back for another review! This one's going to be much shorter! I didn't find any grammatical errors or punctuation issues! Oh, this isn't that important, but there's an ...

Hey there, CTW! Slushy here for a review! I found no grammar/punctuation errors! So this is going to be a short review! Overall, loved your writing! Flows very easily and ...

Hi Olive! SlushySlapped here for a review! I'm just going to jump right in. Looks like AmethystNight got grammar/spelling and such so I'll just give a suggestion or two and ...

Hi Squishy! Avi here for a review! I know you'll be changing this to make it a prologue, but I would just add more descriptions. For example, Malinda actually being ...

Hello! SlushySlapped here for a review! I'm just going to go through grammar/punctuation and all that jazz first. Here the 't' in 'the' needs to be capitalized and it should ...

Hello, my Squishy! First of all, love you. Second of all, damn boy. This was dark/creepy. XD On to the review! Alright, tons of spelling/grammar mistakes, my friend! XD A ...

Hey Stefanos! I'm back, with another review! It only took me like..... let's not talk about how many days. XP Alright, so starting off with the beginning I have to ...

Hello, Stefanos! SlushySlapped here for a review! I'm just going to go as I read. Warning: I am a nitpicker. Oh, and I'll put my suggestions in the quote so ...

Hello there, Change! SlushySlapped here to review! I think that this line is unnecessary. Like Olive said, almost as if it was remembered information just shoved in there. But it's ...

Hey there! SlushySlapped here to review! I'm just going to review as I go. Something that's really bugging me are the huge paragraphs you have in the beginning and at ...

Hi, there LMJ! SlushySlapped here for another review! This time I have a few little nitpicks, but they are merely suggestions. So do with them what you want. :) I ...

Hi, there! SlushySlapped here to review! I'm going to start of with grammar/punctuation/typos and stuff. The 'a' should be capitalized. “Are you cold?” A gentle voice said coming from behind. ...

I posted it twice on accident and can't delete it. So, that's why this is here instead. My bad!

Hi, there! SlushySlapped here to review your story. I feel so much better about doing this now, because I can take my time! I feel like my review of My ...