Sleeplessend

For a first time poem writer this is pretty good. The emotions are all captured well as well as the simplistic factor. A couple of things I would touch up ...

I loved reding this poem. I couldn't help but think of the famous creepypasta we all know and love as "Jeff the killer". I love the emotional impact and focus ...

This was beautifully written. I feel like its more of a letter to that special someone and all of your emotions just poured out of it. If this were in ...

For this being compared to a basketball this piece is rather depressing. This is something a couples counselor would say to a doomed couple. This piece is very well written ...

Awesome piece that we have here. Maybe I'm wrong but I can't help but feel that the guy is an absolute jerk in this scenario. How the "words rolled effortlessly ...

This was a good poem but had the potential to be great. Maybe it was me but I couldn't help but feel that the tone and beat of the poem ...

I like the simplicity of this piece. The feelings are clear cut as well as the delivery. Most times stuff like this doesn't work but for some reason it worked ...

This is a rather fantastic piece. I love how this can be used in many situations other than the for lack of a better term, murdering process of the arachnid. ...

Wow this was very well written! I feel like you and i have the same kind of writing style so i very much enjoyed reading it! I am all for ...

This poem can really be interpreted in so many ways. "Where shall I look for perfection that is not haunted by pretending;" I feel this can be looked at numerous ...

I enjoyed reading this. Poems that have to do with the loss of sanity or the mind in genreal are very enjoyable to read. Here are my thoughts of this ...

I like this poem and the way the cement consumes the person. This makes me feel that the imagery behind this is maybe the feeling of depression? When i read ...

This is honestly what i feel an insane persons sanity would say to them. That maybe if an insane persons sanity didnt feel the need to hide that some people ...

This was a very good piece. I like to read work that asks the reader the question and makes you answer internally of what it should be. I feel this ...

When i read this the first part of it sound like a supernova and the emotion that the star feels once it explodes. Then once in the middle it swayed ...