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Re: Depressing Decisions
Okay. Just to start off, I disagree very strongly with Transporter. No offense, but how can you laugh at something like this?? I honestly don't understand... I actually like the ...
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Acupuncture
This is an okay poem, but no offense, I really dislike it. It's not true. At all. I know because my mom is an acupuncturist, and I have had TONS ...
Dec 2, 2014 -
Re: Foxglove: Chapter Six
Heya! Zhia here to review your story!! I have read some of your chapters, although not all of them. So, I sort of know what's going on. I didn't have ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: [Halberd] Ruby File (3) [REDACTED] (scrapped)
Hey! Zhia here to review this chapter! Forgive me if I get anything wrong, I haven't read the previous chapters... Anyway! On to the review! First of all, may I ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season Two: Episode 21, Kept At Bay
Hello! Zhia here for a Helpful (hopefully) Review! Let's get started, shall we? :D (side note: I have read one of the other chapters, but not all of them, so ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Printer
Hello! Zhia here for a Helpful (hopefully) Review! Let's get started, shall we? :D First of all, THIS IS SO TRUE! Printers are EVIL. This poem is just perfect. I ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Eighteen II
Hey! Zhia here for a Helpful Review (Hopefully! :P ) First of all, I like the story. Even though I haven't read the other chapter, This seems to be going ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Two Year Gamble- Chapter 2: The Name (Rough Draft)
Hello, Zhia here, for a review! This took way too long to be reviewed! so, let's get started, shall we? First of all, I like the story! You have a ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Ocean's Grasp
Hello! Zhia here and I am going to review this poem! First off, I love this. It gives really good imagery and feeling. Yes, dramatic is the right category for ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: I'll show him
I just love this poem. Oh, forgot to sign in. Hi, Zhia here to review your poem! Anyway... Back to the review. I just love this poem, it's so dark.... ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Stones
Hey, Zhia here to rewiew (dissect) your poem, Stones! First off, I agree with wtppowers in the idea that it's' simple at first, but as you reread it over and ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season Two: Episode 18, Deception Part 2
Hey! Zhia here for a review! Ok, first of all, you use really good imagery and word choice. I haven't read the previous chapters, but I can tell that you ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Murder [EDITED]
OH MY GOD THIS WAS GREAT. Creepy, but great. I don't have any nitpicks, I'm not very good at looking for those things... Lol... I love the descriptive words, although ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: Glass Maiden - [chapter one]
Wow, This is great! I love the idea! Glass elemental… You had really good imagery, except for in the beginning, I don't really know what Rick or Dylan looks like, ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: Taste the Sorrow - Part one of Ch. 1
Wow! This is nice! where'd you get the idea from? and one question for my ignorance… Where did they finally end up?
May 7, 2014