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Re: Another Zombie Novel Chapter 1 part 1
Hiii! Skye here for a once-in-a-lifetime review! So, I'll jump right in. This is the beginning of a novel that you're planning, yeah? So, the first sentence has to really ...
Jul 6, 2016 -
Re: Sample/Test
Weeeelll, I think I'll be a helpful person here as well. But instead of just being random, I suppose I'll just teach you some random things about the site. After ...
Feb 29, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 31
so I just read this all in one go whut Comments: This. Is. Wow. The chapters may be sort of short, but each one packs a punch. This one especially. ...
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: American Anarchy
Wow. I wasn't expecting much when I started reading this. I don't generally like Historical Fiction. But somehow, this drew me in. Ahem. Anyway. I'd like to review this fabulous ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: My Little Girl
Okay! Reneia here to review your poem! Things I liked: Okay. I really liked the poem in general, it was an interesting subject that you chose. (And you illustrated it ...
Oct 29, 2015 -
Re: Do You Believe
I'm not quite sure what this was trying to achieve. Was this trying to convert me or was it just random preaching? Also, what I got from this was that ...
Aug 20, 2015 -
Re: The Old Jacket
Heya! Zhia here to review your poem! It deserves it! :D First, let's talk about the things that I love: I love the imagery in this. The choice of language ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Making a Come Back
Hey! Zhia here to review your WONDERFUL YWS POEM! :D Things I LOVE: Well, the YWS theme. Awesomeness. YWS is amazing, and no one can say otherwise. Also, the format ...
Feb 27, 2015 -
Re: I Can't Even
XD this is brilliant. You thought this out really well and were quite witty. I'm not sure how I will review this though. :/ Most people, when they see the ...
Feb 27, 2015 -
Re: Limited Connection
Hello, Zhia here to review your poem!!! I hope I don't misinterpret, like people often do. XD Okay, first off, Here are things I LOVE: Your descriptions are incredible, even ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: It's So Hard
Okay! Zhia here for wonderful review of your wonderful poem! I hope I don't misinterpret, like so many people do with poems. XD What I LOVE: This stanza: Every week ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: The Hidden Star
Okay! Zhia here to review your short story! But even though I'm your friend, I'm not going to be nice with reviewing, so prepare yourself. Okay. I'm not one to ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: Rise of the Fallen: Chapter 2
Hi! Zhia here for a fantastic review!! First of all: Ignore this if you wish, and the caps too, if you want. I'm just gonna have a mini-fangirl-freakout. OH MY ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: [reworking] ch. 2
Okay! ZHIA here to review your chapter. I haven't read the others, so bear with me. XD Sorry it took so long, by the way. OKAY: To start off, Nice!! ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: playground graveyard; i miss you
Hi! Zhia here to review your wonderful poem!! :D First of all-- D: That's so sad! Your friend is in rehab?
Dec 20, 2014