Skydreamer

Thanks a lot Neather! I appreciate it! I will definitely edit it.

Thanks!

XD Logi you're a natural! And thanks HomeschoolTeen, all your comments will help me so much!

Really now? What happened to metaphors? If your going to suggest stuff give examples, and please be nice. Everyone tries. With a little help this poem could be much better, ...

Let's hope at least putting question marks on questions! ;)

I can't like thisss :(

:O Why are you doing things without telling me? :P

I'm so glad! :D

To your first comment I do use that, but not when I'm editing/suggesting things. I don't see the point. :P But anyways, I hope you get what you can out ...

Perfect sense! Perfect, perfect sense! XD I completely agree. It is a indescribable thing. I've tried to tell the person asking me about it this, and still they pried. But ...

lol, it didn't turn out very short...

This was extremely beautiful. I just want to say that I believe that your sister would have been proud of your work and how you wrote this. And that I ...

I've liked it, but I also just want to comment. This is beautiful.

Well, I meant the other half as in the other side of the glass wall. :)

Oh, well then that makes sense.