Skydreamer

Hi Achu! (I like your username!) First here are my edits/corrections: Life full of content of thesaurus. I think this should be Life is filled with content found in thesaurus." ...

Hey! I am gonna review this, sup?! I go by Stanza to Stanza so, here I go. First Stanza: Okay so, this is a confusing start. I don't mind that ...

Hey! I like looking at lyrics and I think this had a very poetic feel to it from the start so good job on that. I also think that the ...

Hey! So, I should start first with an overall review on how much I really like this and why. :P This is really creative! It's nice sometimes to take a ...

Hey! I'm reviewing this! So, I think you really need to talk to someone (like me! :P) About getting some help with poetry formatting. Now, I am not perfect with ...

Hey! I am going to review this! *Does the review dance* :P So, I go from stanza to stanza. First Stanza: Okay, first off, and I noticed this with all ...

Hey, I'm reviewing this! :D So I go from stanza to stanza: First Stanza: This is good, it's a stable start and I know that this is about two people ...

Hmm...Normally I just go from stanza to stanza, but as I am running out of time, this is all I can do: So, this is interesting, but I feel like ...

Hey there I'm gonna review! So, this is really beautiful. And I am very picky about romance as I have said to someone before, but this captivates me, this made ...

Sparkle!! I liked one of your previous works and I'm here to review again. Hey, so, I just need to space this out. Because I usually like to go from ...

Hey, Aley! This is interesting, but I think it could use a little separating. :P I just feel the way you're trying to write it, if it were more spaced ...

Wow. This was written really well. I like how you started although when I started reading for some reason I thought he was at an old lady's house listening to ...

Hey, there I'm gonna review! So, usually I go stanza to stanza, but since you have no stanza's (which is fine). I'll make them! (And you can use them for ...

Hey, I'mma gonna review this!! This is quite short, and I found it a little funny that in the genre Short Story you just put "General, General" because this is ...

Hey, I do love me some poetry! :P So I am going to review this! I go from stanza to stanza. First Stanza: "My head spins and screws in tight ...