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  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: No Looking

    Hey GG! I'm going to review this! I'm going to go paragraph from paragraph on your short story Gooner and then I'll give a review to Ajt's poem in the ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: One Last Chance

    Okay, I am going to review this! You are just a fantastic writer! The way that you started this out was really good. I liked how you were explaining how ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Smoke Filled Forest Eyes

    Hey, I'm going to give this a review. Before I do though I have to say, it was really well written. And I saw the wall post where you said ...

    Jul 27, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Through Her Eyes (Fantasy and reality)

    Here to review! Great job! I thought it sounded really nice and flowed quite well. That said there are some things that could be improved. The first thing that I ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Fly

    Hey Carina!!! I love this! And I'm gonna do a review on it. I must say I really liked how you started it, it made me already have a view ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Drowning

    Hey! I've been on a review halt for a bit. But this brought me out of it, because I LOVE IT. XD I like the way that you arranged it ...

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate

    Hey, dreamy here for the review! I go from stanza to stanza. First Stanza I would've never fell asleep, For that line I would suggest you tweak it to this: ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: the moth

    Hey, here for your review! Cool formatting. I like visual poetry. :P I am not too sure exactly how to review it though so bear with me. So, to start ...

    Jul 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Honour.

    Hey, here to finally do that review! I hope it's worth the wait. :P So I'll try to use more quotes this time! First Stanza This was an interesting start, ...

    Jul 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Woman In The Trees.

    I see you have a lot of reviews to go through, so I'm going to hold back from technical stuff. I just wanted to give a review on just the ...

    Jul 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Faund Stand.

    Hey Jordin! I'm going to review this! :D And it looks good, but I do have some advice/tips. First off, as someone who thinks that title matters, I really do ...

    Jul 11, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Tripped Just To Get Up

    Okay, I am going to take a break from my review laziness hardship and say that your title for this really caught my attention! It just seems like a title ...

    Jul 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: The Right Lie.

    Hey! Here for your review! I go from stanza to stanza. Also I'll be editing stuff, so it'll be in bold. And I'll explain everything in depth! First stanza: "When ...

    Jul 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: I found you

    Hi! Sorry I didn't review your other work, but I am reviewing this one! :D So, I just wanted to first let you know that I found it strange that ...

    Jul 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Invisible

    This was so interesting to read! I really love your style of writing and you captured me from the beginning. When I read the ending I thought, oh, this is ...

    Jul 6, 2013


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— Pablo Neruda