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Re: No Looking
Hey GG! I'm going to review this! I'm going to go paragraph from paragraph on your short story Gooner and then I'll give a review to Ajt's poem in the ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: One Last Chance
Okay, I am going to review this! You are just a fantastic writer! The way that you started this out was really good. I liked how you were explaining how ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Smoke Filled Forest Eyes
Hey, I'm going to give this a review. Before I do though I have to say, it was really well written. And I saw the wall post where you said ...
Jul 27, 2013 -
Re: Through Her Eyes (Fantasy and reality)
Here to review! Great job! I thought it sounded really nice and flowed quite well. That said there are some things that could be improved. The first thing that I ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: Fly
Hey Carina!!! I love this! And I'm gonna do a review on it. I must say I really liked how you started it, it made me already have a view ...
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: Drowning
Hey! I've been on a review halt for a bit. But this brought me out of it, because I LOVE IT. XD I like the way that you arranged it ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate
Hey, dreamy here for the review! I go from stanza to stanza. First Stanza I would've never fell asleep, For that line I would suggest you tweak it to this: ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: the moth
Hey, here for your review! Cool formatting. I like visual poetry. :P I am not too sure exactly how to review it though so bear with me. So, to start ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: Honour.
Hey, here to finally do that review! I hope it's worth the wait. :P So I'll try to use more quotes this time! First Stanza This was an interesting start, ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: The Woman In The Trees.
I see you have a lot of reviews to go through, so I'm going to hold back from technical stuff. I just wanted to give a review on just the ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: A Faund Stand.
Hey Jordin! I'm going to review this! :D And it looks good, but I do have some advice/tips. First off, as someone who thinks that title matters, I really do ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: I Tripped Just To Get Up
Okay, I am going to take a break from my review laziness hardship and say that your title for this really caught my attention! It just seems like a title ...
Jul 10, 2013 -
Re: The Right Lie.
Hey! Here for your review! I go from stanza to stanza. Also I'll be editing stuff, so it'll be in bold. And I'll explain everything in depth! First stanza: "When ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: I found you
Hi! Sorry I didn't review your other work, but I am reviewing this one! :D So, I just wanted to first let you know that I found it strange that ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Invisible
This was so interesting to read! I really love your style of writing and you captured me from the beginning. When I read the ending I thought, oh, this is ...
Jul 6, 2013
