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Re: Harp String
Again the literary works of people on this site leave me speechless. That was captivating. Love it.
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Tall, Dark, and Wintry
I read your story. A glass teardrop streams down my face and a smile forms. I am afraid to blink and lose the tear that emotion has gifted me. My ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: The Flames of Hope
It's a good start! Needs work though.... How about a few deep, meaningful words?
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Oh, My Dear Forgotten.
...Speechless again... that is beautiful. I read this and suddenly feel so empty I could die, yet so full I could explode. I never knew that mere man could feel ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Don't Cry Child
Wow. That's touching. Maybe, in the poem, give a hint of how to not cry or something to do to make the child feel better.
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Soulshattered
Speechless. That touches the soul. I cannot define the true value of your works. My only tip here is for me. To write like you.
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Wolf (Temporary title till I can find something)
Cool. Nice dialog. I am a little confused though.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: The end is near
I am speechless. (good thing I'm typing). That is beautiful. My ideas are keep doing what you are and never stop. Though there is no such thing as being so ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: I lift my heart
I like it! Maybe use some deep adjectives though. Love it!
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: invisible to you. :-(
Great start! I like where your'e coming from, but I think a few meaningful words would help. I truly understand your work and i love it!
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: She Wonders Sometimes.
You speak my hearts contents out loud. Wow.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Lost
Wow. That is beautiful.Many (including me) feel/felt that way and you paint that in flying colours. Your works are truly spellbinding.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: My Princess
You are a true author. I love your work. Maybe using some good meaningful words will improve your skills.
Jan 26, 2011