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Judy! Congratulations, the plot has just increased! Now I am already wondering: "What will they think about her father? What will happen? Will they tell?" Great job! Again, a little ...

Hey Judy! Your writing just keeps improving as I read, as well as the plot and dialogue. It was very nice how you added the history we tried to piece ...

Hey Judy! This is a really good piece. Less information flying at your head (haha, sorry, weird analogy). I liked seeing the sweeter side to Judy and how different clones ...

Great poem! It it is very deep and interesting. A cool thing about this poem is that I had to read it several times to understand it, which is good ...

Ah-mazing! Very beautiful with great imagery and abstract ideas. You never left me. Voice was present in your writing and an otherworldly feel. I love how the onlookers got to ...

Hi Amber and I will be reviewing you! Loved the story (even though it might not seem like it during my "inspection) and was chilled at the end. Problems: 1) ...

Hm. Interesting, scary story. Definitely gave me the chills. A couple problems though: 1) You had choppy, uninteresting sentences. There was only tell, no show (If you didn't know when ...

This is a very lovely peace. I love how you made two poems inside of one big one. Beautiful! I love how you ended with the same thing (it/he was ...

This is really good! It's awful how you said this happened to a friend! I like the way you worded and wrote your stanzas. Had a very nice rhythem and ...

Aw! So sweet! This story was very cute and sad with poor Aden. This is the kind of story that makes me want more of it. Good job! I hope ...

I really liked this story! It was very original, it was intruiging, and it had a great selection of characters. At some points in the story, a little odd tidbit ...

Wow that was a really good story! I just had some few nitpicks though. You may need to read your story aloud and look for place where you could put ...

Wow. This is an amazing poem! You had amazing imagery and beautiful similies and metaphors. It really gave me an idea of what it is like to be old, to ...

This was amazing! Nothing bad to it :) Actually, the only nitpick was that it went from #10 to #1 but I understand. It's the least worst to biggest worst. ...

I'm not too worried about the grammer. I'd like it if you guys could tell me which places in it are most confusing, don't make sense, and your overall feeling ...