Sins

Hey jas! Here as requested, 'cause I'm cool. Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions Her hands were stuffed into her pockets, head bent but ...

Another masterpiece by thehobbitgangster! 8) Sorry, this isn't a proper review. I just thought I'd drop by and leave a comment. Even if this was a proper review, I wouldn't ...

haha, this made me giggle! I''m cool, k? :wink: This isn't a proper review, sorry. I just read this and it made me feel warm inside so I thought I'd ...

Hey shubhi :) Here as requested. “Melanie, stop,” I cried. I was running after her on a dark street of God knows where I agree with the other reviewers on ...

Hey again! You know the drill. :wink: We have found you at last, Megan Marie Bell. At this point I was thinking, Wow, somebody’s a bit of a drama queen. ...

Hey ultraviolet! Here as requested. 8) Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions My dreams have always made my life difficult. I like this opening ...

Hey BondGirl! Here to review. Don't take my critique too seriously, I'm not very good at reviewing poetry. :roll: Millions are dead, their masks painted with lead. Poison in the ...

Hey again! Here for the last review. 8) “Don’t trip,” Tasha warns, sounding strangely serious for such a small request. Because I don't really like sentences that start with Because. ...

It's me again. :wink: You know the drill. I follow Tasha out the door and into the light, blinking a few times. The white walls remind me of the strange ...

Heya :) Here to review as requested! Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions Conscious thoughts swirl into my head and I pull my eyelids ...

Heya Scarlette :) Here to review as requested! I love your username, by the way... :D Red = Negatives/corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions “Would you ...

Heya Leth! I'm here to review... duh. :wink: Red = Corrections/negative Blue = Things I like Bold = My suggestions/comments I watched as the moon rose slowly over the horizon. ...

Hey Lydia! You haven't got any reviews on this so far, so I thought I'd help you out. I haven't read the first few chapters so I'll probably fail epically. ...

Hey again :) Back for another review! Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments JoJo ran across the hallway to the girls' washroom. It wasn't ...

Heya writingwords, shubhiloves2write suggested that I check this out, so here I am. 8) Red = Corrections Blue = What I like Bold = My comments Chapter 1 JoJo looked ...