SimonCowellLuver

This is a little cliche but well done. Not bad story but chill out with the cliches and work on grammar.

I like this it is very good. Nothing much to say about this work except good job.

This was good. I liked it especially the beginning. Nothing to critique here. Good Job

I liked this very nice to add the music with it. Good Job

Try not to put extra info or it could not work out well next time. But this time it was pretty good. So don't push anymore information than you need ...

I love it. This is great the only thing is commas and periods. I also have a bad time with them too. Don't feel awkward. keep writing.

Not bad but can use some work. I agree with GryphonFledgling on this one. Fix the grammar errors and you will be ok b ut some other problems are nawkwardness ...

Sometimes I do the same thing. This was good. Nothing to critique here. Great Job!

Very good. But my preference is the first chapter so far. Nothing much to critique here awesome job.

Not bad but i agree with kittykat on this one try to work on your grammar. That is one big problem in writing. Trust me I know. Hope this helps!

I haven't found anything to critique in this except so common grammar errors but thats no problem Easy fix! Great story Keep up the good writing

There is nothing to critique here it was good. Keep writing

This isn't to shabby. LOL I wish i could hear how it goes. If you ever make a video of this song let me know. Would love to hear it ...

The poem is confusing I know because I wrote it. But it isn't terrible like ya'll said. Its just differnent. I agree on some of the critique but not all. ...

Not bad i got to say not bad at all!! Or Not to shabby. LOL. keep on writing!!