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SilloriaD

  • Article / Essay » Literature, Historical Fiction Re: To Kill A Mockingbird: From Text to Cinema

    Hello! I hope this assignment goes well for you- I've had hard graders as well, so I'll do my best to help you. Overall, I think you did a great ...

    Oct 27, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: deleted

    Hello! SilloriaD here with another poetry review. Let's jump right in, feet first! So, first, I have to admit I agree with literally everything the previous reviewer said. No need ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Inspiration: Collateral Damage Left By Love and Art

    Hello! SilloriaD here with another crap-tastic poetry review- that's, of course, to say my reviewing sucks, not your writing skills. So, I'll agree with the previous reviewer- the diction in ...

    Apr 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: False Impressions

    I'm going to attempt to review this beautiful piece, even though I'm not great at poetry reviews. First of all, I have to agree with the previous reviewer on one ...

    Apr 11, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Culture Re: Never Gonna Give You Up

    I have to agree with the others- this is far too much repetition for my taste. But I do love me some free points, so on with this review!| The ...

    Apr 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Morphine

    I have to agree with the previous reviewer. The rhythm is almost non-existent. But, I also feel like this poem has more to say and would benefit from being lengthened ...

    Apr 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: when I lay my head on one final bed of dandelions ​ (in Tennessee, no less)

    Hello. SilloriaD here with what may be an entirely unhelplful poetry review. I apologize in advance for what is about to occur. So, let us get the nitpicky things out ...

    Apr 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Friends Don't Share Such Silences

    This touched me deeply, but I'm afraid I'll still have to be critical of some sections in this piece. To me, the opening felt clumsy. I feel like it wasn't ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: In the Depths of His Mind

    I'm actually close to tears. Your opening was fantastic. Your attention to detail is astounding. I was instantly submerged into the scene. I WAS the character. It hit me with ...

    Feb 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Film Re: Titania

    Oh my god! This was a fantastic read! Though, I wouldn't necessarily consider it a parody of Titanic, all things considered. But you pacing was absolutely stunning. The little moments ...

    Jan 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I don't think of myself as old

    Hello! First things first, I think I haven't slammed the like button that hard in quite a while. There were so many little details that I resonated with in this ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Father's Dream

    Hello! This piece is very appealing to me for some odd reason. I'm guessing the experience is more personal than fictional, and that likely explains how nicely it rings true. ...

    Dec 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: A Guilty Father

    Hello! I'm here with a review for your work. So, the first thing I want to say is about the title. You didn't overthink it, which is a good sign. ...

    Dec 1, 2016
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: The Beast Within

    Hello! Here with a review of this piece. Firstly, I'd like to say that the title was an instant eye-catcher. It really got my attention in the Green Room amidst ...

    Dec 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Prologue

    Hello! Pardon me if this review isn't amazing, I'm still attempting to get back into the swing of things here on YWS. So, just a few things that I'm not ...

    May 23, 2016


Be steadfast as a tower that doth not bend its stately summit to the tempest’s shock.
— Dante Alighieri