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Hello! I hope this assignment goes well for you- I've had hard graders as well, so I'll do my best to help you. Overall, I think you did a great ...

Hello! SilloriaD here with another poetry review. Let's jump right in, feet first! So, first, I have to admit I agree with literally everything the previous reviewer said. No need ...

Hello! SilloriaD here with another crap-tastic poetry review- that's, of course, to say my reviewing sucks, not your writing skills. So, I'll agree with the previous reviewer- the diction in ...

I'm going to attempt to review this beautiful piece, even though I'm not great at poetry reviews. First of all, I have to agree with the previous reviewer on one ...

I have to agree with the others- this is far too much repetition for my taste. But I do love me some free points, so on with this review!| The ...

I have to agree with the previous reviewer. The rhythm is almost non-existent. But, I also feel like this poem has more to say and would benefit from being lengthened ...

Hello. SilloriaD here with what may be an entirely unhelplful poetry review. I apologize in advance for what is about to occur. So, let us get the nitpicky things out ...

This touched me deeply, but I'm afraid I'll still have to be critical of some sections in this piece. To me, the opening felt clumsy. I feel like it wasn't ...

I'm actually close to tears. Your opening was fantastic. Your attention to detail is astounding. I was instantly submerged into the scene. I WAS the character. It hit me with ...

Oh my god! This was a fantastic read! Though, I wouldn't necessarily consider it a parody of Titanic, all things considered. But you pacing was absolutely stunning. The little moments ...

Hello! First things first, I think I haven't slammed the like button that hard in quite a while. There were so many little details that I resonated with in this ...

Hello! This piece is very appealing to me for some odd reason. I'm guessing the experience is more personal than fictional, and that likely explains how nicely it rings true. ...

Hello! I'm here with a review for your work. So, the first thing I want to say is about the title. You didn't overthink it, which is a good sign. ...

Hello! Here with a review of this piece. Firstly, I'd like to say that the title was an instant eye-catcher. It really got my attention in the Green Room amidst ...

Hello! Pardon me if this review isn't amazing, I'm still attempting to get back into the swing of things here on YWS. So, just a few things that I'm not ...