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Shrieeeeeeeeeek. Creepy. I'm looking over my shoulder right now to make sure there's no skeleton lady behind me. I love the descriptive, simpleness of it. Kind of beautiful in a ...

Yay! Nixy finally gets flash fiction!!! Welcome to the world of fragmented stories bouncing around in your brain! But now, back to business. I liked it. A lot. The beginning ...

Oh my god. LOVE IT!!! Benvolio: You misspelled “clergy.” And you had a love affair with a priest? Mercutio1594: EW NO! Benvolio: A monk, then? Mercutio1594: … Benvolio: Mercutio? Mercutio1594 ...

Nice :) It sounds very beautiful, and I can see what you are describing very vividly. My only problem would be the caps after commas, and the ending line is ...

Ooh, I love this! My mother stands there washing the dishes under running water staring into a dirty concrete wall, she stalls , wondering what happened to her life but ...

Hey, deelish! I thought this was really, really good. Very deep and sweet. I love your writing style. One tiny typo: I would see my friend again someday, whether it ...

Hi, Wickedwonder! I'll review you today :) The first thing I noticed about this piece was that it didn't really seem to have a point. There was no defined beginning, ...

I like this. It's deep, but a quick read and tells a story, which I love. I think you could make it a bit longer, and go into more detail ...

. I liked my hair when it was regular. And brown. Not like I got in a fight with a tomato.” Love it. So much. I tried to put a ...

Hearing the screams of the dying, the living calling to their friends, and every sound in between. This is a fragment sentence. You need to add something to it; a ...

Okay, first things first, I think the placement of this is a little bit awkward. I think your last two chapters have seemed a little rushed and there are large ...

I walk along an empty street Shadows pass me by Their souls my worries, fears and doubts Images brought to life I love this stanza. The words themselves sound very ...

Oh, wow, this was wonderful. Just wonderful. Definitely worth it to read the entire thing, even though I don't usually like long pieces. My only little critique would be the ...

Ooh, this was great!!! Something that felt very much like a small boot kicked him in the bottom from behind, and he lurched forward with a little cry of surprise. ...

Hello! I can see i don't really need to edit this because it seems like everyone else has done it for me :) Anyway, I would like to hit 400 ...