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I like the poem, woah, it's beautifully written. I noticed awhile ago also that evil spelled backwards is live. Which I thought was weird and a coincidence. This poem is ...

I like this story, I felt like I was going through some bio class too. My favorite part: "'Trust me, Pascal,' he said through gritted teeth, 'it matters. Fix him, ...

Wow, I haven't read any of the previous chapters but I really like this work. I'm a huge fan of fantasy and action and this story is the epitome of ...

I like the story, and I like your character Rahim, though he seems to have his inner conflicts and inner demons. It seems he stabbed Adonia in the beginning out ...

Woah, I loved it, it seems like a story told by a serial killer, wow, that's really different for me but awesome. I love how the character seems to switch ...

Pretty sad, but a great story or introduction to a story. I felt the sadness that the main character felt and I'm truly curious as to how this will all ...

Wow, I'm impressed that you wrote this at only 11, your vocabulary and putting together of words seems ahead of your time, I love it. I truly love my mother, ...

I like this poem, it presents the hard reality of many people. "You don't pick and choose your demons" - You definitely don't and it shows how some people are ...

I like it, I wish I heard a recording, I always felt like someone singing it made you feel the words more and sense more. It seems to have a ...

I loved it, it had a creepy and horror based sense to it. It would be awesome if it expanded into a story with many chapters. I loved the description, ...

Wow, I like what you did here. Your journal entry is really descriptive and it allows us to get a sense of who you are. You aren't to blame for ...

I really like this, and it your character reminds me of the one I made in my story. I love how real your character feels, and I find his thoughts ...