Shriek

Just to touch upon what everyone else has said: this was great. You seem to have a knack for using adjectives, though sometimes your descriptions are over-the-top. You want to ...

YES! First another "Untitled," and now another installment of "Voices." You people are spoiling me this weekend, I swear. This was well-done, as the four before it. Gramatically speaking, this ...

Ahhh, the pure bliss of another Untitled by Ari. I almost want to ask you to get a name for these things ... but "Untitled" is kind of fitting for ...

I don't really have much to say that Dream Deep hasn't touched upon. The images were gorgeous (especially the white roses against a black sky), but I didn't know what ...

This is great stuff here, all things considered. It reminds me of one of those "urban legends" kids tell -- like some of the stories you'd hear on Hey Arnold ...

Oooh. I don't think I've ever read anything of yours, Mesh -- but if your other stuff is anything like this sketch, I should really go back and do so ...

This was an excellent addition to the Voices collection, as I've now come to expect from from. You always manage to meet -- and exceed -- my expectations. Well, let's ...

Give more verbose descriptions for an ironic effect. Ahahaa, awesome. I second the suggestion. This was pretty good, Grif. Although ... I think the execution of the elite authors was ...

This is excellent, Brad. Though I'm sure much of the deeper meaning went over my head, I did appreciate the images this brought to mind--especially the bit about the "foreign ...

"I like this poem, dont' you? I think it's actually one of the best things I've written in a long time." I completely agree. In no way am I a ...

I liked this. To echo Jack, it's simplistic and easy to relate to. Again, it needs punctuation. That basically covers what I was going to say. Nice work. (Oh, and ...

Oooh, love that last line. Actually, I love this entire thing. It's more personal, more emotional than the first. Just the right amount of description and dialogue. Picturesque descriptions and ...

I agree with Hekategirl on her suggestion with the ending. Other than that, I have no critiques, only praise. I liked this very much. I found it short and sweet ...

Awh, I love this. I'm not really one for pointing out grammatical errors and whatever on personal pieces--leave the writing to the heart, not the head is my philosophy. And ...

Wow. I usually cannot stand thoroughly descriptive pieces without an ounce of storyline or dialogue. But this, of course, is an exception to the rule. Not only is the writing ...