A Writing Parable

by Griffinkeeper

Published April 12, 2006

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There was once an author that went around giving lectures. His style was so elegant, that everyone thought he was a perfect writer. His word choice was so sophisticated, that it flew over the minds of the lower class, and dazzled the upper class.

He offered classes, but when he taught, few, if any, people understood him. So great was his power, that nobody could understand him. Yet they continued to admire him. His students went on and began writing in a similar manner. Soon, they began writing for the upper class as well, and enjoyed enormous prestiege among certain circles, which considered themselves smart, educated, and sophisticated.

So diverted and saturated were the authors and nobles, that they completely missed a small little pamphlet that was released by an author for the lower class. He had not been among the great authors pupils, instead an old scholar who had, by trial and error, become well respected by his peers for being able to communicate efficently.

The pamphlet, far from containing the language of the upper class, was written for the lower class. It proceeded to detail the excesses and vanity of the authors and the elite. It continued to identify how they were responsible for their situation in life.

So widely distributed was this book, that it soon reached the barracks, where it spread like wildfire. The result was a spontaneous uprising, which resulted in the death of the superfluous authors and the elite.

The moral of the story: Write so people can understand you.

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Shriek
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Shriek wrote a review Review · Apr 13, 2006

Snoink wrote:Give more verbose descriptions for an ironic effect.

Ahahaa, awesome. I second the suggestion.


This was pretty good, Grif. Although ... I think the execution of the elite authors was a tad extreme. It got the point across, though. Haha.

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Swires
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Swires commented Comment · Apr 12, 2006

LOL! Nice parable, nice moral as well.

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Snoink
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Snoink commented Comment · Apr 12, 2006

Give more verbose descriptions for an ironic effect.

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Duskglimmer
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Duskglimmer commented Comment · Apr 12, 2006

I love Parables, Grif. Congrats on writing one about the power of comprehension.

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Griffinkeeper
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Griffinkeeper commented Comment · Apr 12, 2006

*Begins eating cookies at a frantic rate, before stopping, horrified.*

Got Milk?

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smaur
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smaur wrote a review Review · Apr 12, 2006

Sam wrote:Oh my...we certainly don't have any superflous people here, do we?


What? Of course not. We YWSers are a clear, concise bunch ...

Griffinkeeper: You get lots and lots of cookies.

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Black Ghost
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Black Ghost commented Comment · Apr 12, 2006

They have some on the other writing site: The Old, dumb, too smart for Yu-gi-oh writers association.

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Sam
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Sam commented Comment · Apr 12, 2006

Oh my...we certainly don't have any superflous people here, do we?



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