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Yep!There are too much grammatical and spelling errors,so.....better revise it.

Good job! The poem has feelings in it. :)

A touchy poem with lots of emotions.Liked it very much. :) Good work!

Good job! This is a marvellous piece of work and I liked it.Keep writing :)

Good job! :) Only the second sentence, of the second para is not making much sence.

Impressive!A nice one :)

So do I,I love chocolate.Yummy!! Nice one. :)

I like the last line.Good job.

Funny and pretty good for a ten year old kid :)

Hmm..I liked it.Its a error free work.Keep writing and posting it here :)

Good job! Its a interesting poem.I think there are no errors,other than the 'snowflakes'which is one word(I guess SnipSnip has already mentioned it) :)

Its GOOD!Probably because you have put your all feelings in it. :)

Nice and simple.Good job :)

Short,sweet and was a good idea to dedicate it to them.Good job :)

GOOD!but got to work on the things which Snoink has suggested on. Best of luck. :)