Sherri

Hi Aurora99, I'm back to review again! :) First of all... wow. You continued on from the last chapter awesomely! Usually when writers end with cliff-hangers that massive, the next ...

Hi MysteryMe, this is Sherri! I love the message you've shown here; the idea of a future-self looking back at a self in the present is an interesting thought. Do ...

Hi Noelle, this is Sherri! :) I really love the idea behind this story; I used to write poetry with this theme in mind! You executed this near-perfectly with only ...

Hi SecreteJournalist, this is Sherri. The story itself sounds alright, especially if this is your first attempt. I noticed a few things here and there that might need work, but ...

Hi null, this is Sherri! Welcome to YWS :) The title was interesting, and is part of the reason a clicked on the poem! I liked the idea of the ...

Hi verymaryanna, this is Sherri. I like your poem! I noticed a few things, though. You might want to go through and capitalize your 'i's; I know some people do ...

Hi Cairo, this is Sherri! I loved your poem :) I have basically the same nitpicks as Incogneato, so I'll just skip over that. I love how you use line ...

Hi again, Moo, it's Sherri :) I will admit that taxidermy kind of freaked me out before... it doesn't freak me out as much now, since you've put it into ...

Hey Talia, this is Sherri! :) Okay, wow; this is not only dramatic and tragic, but also very sad. There weren't any spelling or grammar errors or anything like that, ...

Hi fallenoutofgrace, this is Sherri! :) I really love these poems, though I do agree with Clarity that you should post the poems separate so they both get the attention ...

Hi ThatWriterGuy, this is Sherri! I loved the dramatic ending; it wasn't what I expected! The story had me at the edge of my metaphorical seat the entire time. I ...

Hi JohnLocke1, this is Sherri! I loved your story :D First, I wanted to suggest and point out some things. Firstly, a the beginning of the second paragraph, the sentence: ...

Hi pjkio03; this is Sherri! So... wow. This is really good! Toward the middle of the poem, I got this feeling it wasn't going to end how I thought it ...

Hi Cheetah; this is Sherri :) Adorable avatar! :D I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors, so you're all good on that. I wanted to let you know how ...

Hi CuriosityCat, this is Sherri! I love your avatar... so cute! :) I really enjoyed this poem; the story of the two twins is a sad one, but all the ...