Sherri

Hi SoundsOfSilence, Sherri here to review. I really love this, and--despite the description--I wasn't expecting it. I really liked how you explained your feelings (I'm assuming that's what this poem ...

Hi Nightcrawler, Sherri here to review! I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'm a little confused, but this story is great from what I've read! In the line "I ...

Hey verymaryanna, Sherri here to review! I love the language you use here; very old-time and a refresher compared to modern poetry. I wouldn't be able to write it myself ...

Hi spacesoldier, Sherri here for a review. First of all, I would really appreciate it if you put an 18+ for language mark on your piece; you use the f-bomb ...

Hi shinobithief. Sherri here to review at your request. :) This poem is really cute, if you don't mind that adjective. The rhyming adds to the light-heartedness, and the idea ...

Hi ReisePiecey, Sherri here for a review. I really love this poem :) You did such a great job. You packed a lot of power into this! I enjoyed the ...

Hey Kanome! Sherri here for a review. You're definitely not alone! I am anime/manga obsessed, and certainly agree with your statement that it's hard to talk about anime or manga ...

Hi SapphireEyes, Sherri here to review your poem. You did a great job! I love the imagery, and the actual idea of the poem is one that many can relate ...

Hi Brunnera! Sherri here to review :) I love this story!! You write really well, fusing basic story-telling with descriptive detail and creative words; it made for a very nice ...

Hi Renard! Sherri here for a review. I really love how you started this out; it caught my attention instantly. Like HystericalSav said, what's normal about a bag of wet ...

Hi Sabrina738, this is Sherri for a review. This story has some promise! I'm sure you'll be able to develop it into something great, especially as your story continues and ...

Hi Savvy, it's Sherri! I love this poem, and the idea that (I think) it represents. Correct me if I'm wrong, but is this about a child that slowly went ...

Hi Crimsona, it's Sherri! I really love this piece, mostly because almost all end-of-the-year and evaluation tests are like this. They rely completely on the ability to memorize equations and ...

Hi TakeThatYouFiend, this is Sherri. I love your username! :D I love the idea of this poem, especially the last two lines; those two made the biggest impression on me, ...

Hi ErinYount, this is Sherri :) This poem is beautiful! I love the message you have written out, and the use of repetition to make a point. In the first ...