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Hello! I enjoyed this poem for a lot of reasons, one of which being that I can relate to this. Sometimes anger drives an action that you regret for quite ...

Hi Haven235! This... is actually really amazing! I still have the chills from reading this. XD It's one of those works where I'm shivering but I can't pinpoint exactly why. ...

Hi summerlovee! Oh, this is so sweet! :D I really loved the poem--though sometimes it can be hard for me to read free verse, especially with long lines like these. ...

Hello! I want to start off and say immediately that I am not religious--I respect all religions, of course, and am familiar with the belief of God as quite a ...

Hi Dragonlord! I really liked this piece! The idea of the earth and the universe achieving full beauty is a wonderful concept; your descriptions also worked really well with this! ...

Hi there! :) I noticed you put at the bottom that you don't usually write in the third person... By the time I was finished, I actually noted to myself ...

Hey there! :D Like Fallenoutofgrace, I'm new to the story, so I also apologize if something in my review has already been explained. First off, great job! You have an ...

Hello, there, Ehobby! :D I love the story you have going here... To be honest, given the title, I was very thrown off by the content! XD But after I ...

Hey BuggieDude! I started reading this and had to stop and look at who had written it because the writing style seemed so familiar; turns out, it was you! :D ...

Hello there! What a lovely story you have going here... :) I haven't read the other chapters yet, but it looks great so far. I love the title; it sounds ...

Hello!! :D Let me go ahead and start with: I found absolutely nothing wrong with this grammar/spelling wise! :D I just really wanted to stop by and let you know ...

Hey there! You have a lovely story going here; rather dark, but I really like it. 'Nightmare' is an interesting name choice... I haven't read the other chapters yet, so ...

Hey ScarlettFire! :D I really enjoyed this; Pretzelsing was right about it being suspenseful. As soon as I started reading, I was instantly pulled in and fully absorbed. I loved ...

Hi Fallenoutofgrace! To start off, I'll admit I couldn't find anything wrong grammar/spelling-wise with your poem, but it doesn't deserve to be in the green room. It's so wonderful! :D ...

Hey there! I love the Warriors series, so this was a really, really nice treat! :D First of all, I loved the story! Somewhat morbid, but very promising as a ...