Shearwater

Hi there! First of all, I like the clarity of this piece. It digs deep into a person's emotions and I agree with everything that you said, I mean, I ...

Hey Ofir! Thanks for the pm, I'll gladly review the next chapter :) The carpet was the color of puke anyways – I didn't really care if we had to ...

Hey Ofir! I promised a review and here it is. Alright, this is going to be a rough one so be prepared :D My heart was beating so loudly in ...

Hi there, I'm Pink and I'll be doing a short review for you today :) Nitpicks I was glad to here that he had come back a few years later, ...

Hey ya, Pink here, dropping by for a quick review. So I'm going to nit-pick a little here. His teeth are crooked in the most perfect way, and shiny and ...

Hello Fromnz (I bet you're from New Zealand, right? My dad loves that place for some reason) Anyway, on to the review. I think you really need to take a ...

Hi there! You have a beautiful title, I like it. Also, gosh, I'm working on a romantic novel right now and your character Lucas has the same name as mine ...

Hi, Pink here! I'l be doing a quick review for you today. Characters: You character seems rude a bit but I haven't read the first chapter really so I wouldn't ...

Hi, Pink here! Oh my lord, I have to say this is such a touching, gripping and painful piece to read. The words just clenched my heart, you did such ...

Hi Retrodisco, Pink here. I'll be doing a quick review for your piece today. There are quite a bit of misspelled words and such in this piece that I'd like ...

We stood expectantly. All nineteen martyrs that we should have been waited in silence (.) (I would start a new sentence here) Sweat dribbling from our filthy heads to run ...

Kyaaa, Tanya this was pretty amazing! It was gripping from the beginning! The whole time walkers thing is pretty cool too. Everyone already has picked out the things I wanted ...

Hey *Coco! Wow I have to say I really loved the revamped version of the first chapter. Just the very beginning was gripping enough with the whole sensing your parents ...

Hi! Pink here :) Alright, what to say about this piece? I really like it, it's got a bitter taste to it but her love is twisted. I'd like to ...

Hey Sionarama, it's Pink, here as promised. Alright so I like the whole god and goddess aspect of this. Along with the Greek mythology, it's quite refreshing and I don't ...