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Sharon1407

Sharon1407

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: onwards and upwards; like dandelions

    Hey there... Firstly, it was too good a read. Although it deals with the more negative feelings of life, It is relatable which I think, should the foremost concern in ...

    Apr 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spring's Song

    Hey there, that's a sweet poem you wrote there. It's simple, precise and to the point, basically stuff that everyone can read. I could make out its inner meaning because ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: to the right side of your body

    Hey there anngelalu, that was quite poem. I mean, the way you have maintained the flow of the poem, is very effortless. I have always had special admiration for poems ...

    Mar 30, 2017
  • Lyrics » Humor, Satire Re: cooking.

    Hi.. So I see that you have worked with quite many tricky forms of writing here, although not being enough conscious about it. But you have sure done a great ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Dirty Mistress: To Be or Not To Be?

    Hey there.. Sharon here.. Okay, so this ias a nice "essay" as you term it to be. But if you would insert this in your blog or diary or journal ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Red Balloon

    Hey there.. Sharon here for a review.. So as you said, I interpreted it in my own way.. And I found love to be the main idea.. the title could ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Journey That Never Ends...

    Hey.. An inspirational poem.. just giving a glimpse into the modern genre of poetry.. The change from "I" to "you" could have been more transitional rather than sudden.. It sort ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Daddy?

    Hey there.. Sharon here for a review.. There was a nice beginning to the story and the title is very apt.. There are a few grammatical errors here and there ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Woh muskurana tera yaad aaya

    Arre waah! Bahut khoob.. haha.. Actually that was a bit of filmy reaction, I know.. It is a very nice poem.. but I think that's the first hindi poem I ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Elysium

    Wow! I had to start with this because this was my instant reaction.. Last I had given such a reaction was when I had read Ode to a Nightingale by ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: A Friend of Death

    Hey there.. just a simple review.. The title was really appealing which was why I was drawn towards this work at the first place.. And after reading the story, I ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fantasy short story

    Hi.. Sharon here for a review.. First of all, I think the title could have been a hell lot better but that may have happened because of lack of time ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Delineate

    Hi.. A few suggestions, that's all.. I think the genre is incorrect. And might be a bit of a disappointment to readers. And even if it's a short story, it's ...

    Oct 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, Satire Re: Muggles Gone Wild

    Actually, you can call this whatever you like.. a review or a comment or praise, whatever.. That's because I just can't find any flaw in it. It is realistic although ...

    Oct 24, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The night's walk

    Hi! So I am here for a review.. Okay. So first of all, the poem is well-written, although if this is a critical analysis, then I would suggest that the ...

    Oct 24, 2016


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