Young Writers Society

Hello! Shallow again, what is up? When I saw this up, I was so excited and read it, no segues! And I must say, this is a nice slow chapter ...

Hullo! The name's ShallowHouse and upon thine request, I review thine work! Let's see... Wow, this is a wonderful read. There were minor grammatical errors and the like, but all ...

Hey, Wilson! It's me again! Sorry for the late review, I was so busy in life and could only read this now! Normally, I wouldn't read a single chapter with ...

Hullo there! The name's Shallow, and I've read your work! Now, this here's a real nice and interesting two chapters, I have to say! I'll go into Chapter 1 for ...

Hullo there! I saw "Historical Fiction" and got very intrigued, I don't see many Lovecraft-inspired stories, and this seemed like a very nice read! I just want to say first ...

Hi, Ina! I might be late to the party, but better late than never, I say! I love the picture in the beginning. The simplistic pattern of a green zigzag ...

Hello, Mika! This is Alex/ShallowHouse, I've been out a long while and this might be a good time to come back to this site by reviewing your work! Given, it ...

Hi, Icon! AAAHHHHHH PANTY AND STOCKING! (I havent actually watched it but it's in my bucket list!) Okay, I'm not a good artist but I just want to say I ...

Hi, Icon!

HI, ANGEL! I love what you did in this short story! You really humanized Bucky in a way not shown in any movie he was in! The theme of silence ...

Hi, felistia! I'm sorry for the late review! I didn't notice the time jump! But when I did, I was like... Zoltar and Nira under a tree! S-N-U-G-G-L-ING! I have ...

Hi, YCL! I like your poem! When I read it, it made me want to look at the sun and just spend the time to see it set. And you ...

HEYO, ANGEL! I HAD FUN READING THIS! I see that your chapters are getting progressively longer and longer and I am loving it! The eagles were brutally shot down indeed! ...

Hoi hoi, Hanuli! First of all, thank you for the request! And secondly, this beginning is interesting! Starting of with a curse! Gives me a nostalgia trip to God of ...

Hey there, Icon! I just want to say that you beginning was great! Though I wanted it to be longer! Mrs. Good is so grumpy! The chapter was great like ...