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  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Historical Fiction
    Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 2.

    Hello! Shallow again, what is up? When I saw this up, I was so excited and read it, no segues! And I must say, this is a nice slow chapter ...

    Feb 10, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Historical Fiction
    Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 1.

    Hullo! The name's ShallowHouse and upon thine request, I review thine work! Let's see... Wow, this is a wonderful read. There were minor grammatical errors and the like, but all ...

    Feb 7, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Science, Action / Adventure
    Re: Sakuran tears chapter 1

    Hey, Wilson! It's me again! Sorry for the late review, I was so busy in life and could only read this now! Normally, I wouldn't read a single chapter with ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: 2050 by RPD (Chapters 1 + 2)

    Hullo there! The name's Shallow, and I've read your work! Now, this here's a real nice and interesting two chapters, I have to say! I'll go into Chapter 1 for ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Prologue

    Hullo there! I saw "Historical Fiction" and got very intrigued, I don't see many Lovecraft-inspired stories, and this seemed like a very nice read! I just want to say first ...

    Jan 12, 2023

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Wonderful

    Hi, Ina! I might be late to the party, but better late than never, I say! I love the picture in the beginning. The simplistic pattern of a green zigzag ...

    Jan 12, 2023

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology
    Re: The AI war

    Hello, Mika! This is Alex/ShallowHouse, I've been out a long while and this might be a good time to come back to this site by reviewing your work! Given, it ...

    Jan 10, 2023

  • Art » General, Other
    Re: I Attempted Art

    Hi, Icon! AAAHHHHHH PANTY AND STOCKING! (I havent actually watched it but it's in my bucket list!) Okay, I'm not a good artist but I just want to say I ...

    Apr 30, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Historical Fiction
    Re: The Witch's Hut- Chapters 2+3

    Hi, Icon!

    Apr 29, 2020

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Silence- A Bucky Songfic

    HI, ANGEL! I love what you did in this short story! You really humanized Bucky in a way not shown in any movie he was in! The theme of silence ...

    Apr 28, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Two

    Hi, felistia! I'm sorry for the late review! I didn't notice the time jump! But when I did, I was like... Zoltar and Nira under a tree! S-N-U-G-G-L-ING! I have ...

    Apr 27, 2020

  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic
    Re: Sunset

    Hi, YCL! I like your poem! When I read it, it made me want to look at the sun and just spend the time to see it set. And you ...

    Apr 27, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Girl Behind the Smile Chapter 5

    HEYO, ANGEL! I HAD FUN READING THIS! I see that your chapters are getting progressively longer and longer and I am loving it! The eagles were brutally shot down indeed! ...

    Apr 27, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: ennui - 01

    Hoi hoi, Hanuli! First of all, thank you for the request! And secondly, this beginning is interesting! Starting of with a curse! Gives me a nostalgia trip to God of ...

    Apr 27, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Historical Fiction
    Re: The Witch's Hut- Chapter One

    Hey there, Icon! I just want to say that you beginning was great! Though I wanted it to be longer! Mrs. Good is so grumpy! The chapter was great like ...

    Apr 26, 2020

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