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Re: A Type of Jam
*Gasps* *Gasps* *Sighs* This is a complete package of raw beauty,mate!! I mean,there's this beautiful layering of innocence ,garnished with sophistication.The choice of words is simply fabulous. AND T
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Re: The Light
Seriously,a great piece of poetry. Revolves beautifully around the theme of spirituality,creating a mild ecstasy within. :-) You're really good at this! One suggestion though- Instead of taking The Al
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Golden rules
It is a quite a brilliant poem. But yet again,I agree,with #Donisback ,who suggested,saying that it would give the poem a clearer picture with the use of more apt punctuation. ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: She Couldn't Be Good
Hii' Quite a baffling poem,you know.I just liked the way,you were so straightfoward at throwing your emotions around in the lines,as if you were throwing "tantrums too sane,in grace." -Hahah..:-D ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: What I let you see
Whoaa Whoaa Whoaa.-*Regains back senses* Must say,you have an amazing vocabulary with a mindboggling perspective on life. You know,I really adore the ones ,having such a depth about themselves.People
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: What used to be
Hii, So I am here for a review. Well,I found the poem beautiful and yeah,you definitely had someone in mind ,while you were at it,creating quite a vivid imagery in ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Falling
Hey, So..I am here to do a review.What I felt reading your poem is this,that-You are quite simplistic in you approach,someone who believes in keeping things simple and I right....or ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Antagonism & Howitzers & Egomania To Blood
This is a really a piece ,beautified with the use of such strong metaphors and terms,that it looks like quite a piece of poetry revelling in all its antiquity.;-) Loved ...
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: No Kulfi Today
Hey. So,now ,its me doing a review for you.:-) Well,I must say,its quite a simplistic beauty in terms with the what you call is "Reality" . The use of the ...
Jul 8, 2014
