ShakespeareWallah

sorry it came out out.

You, Persy, are a delight to read.

and btw, I thought it was a teeny bit too short. A little more could have been nice.

thanks for the review Devan, I normally write prose and really don't know much about verses. Anyway, i wanted to show how poor and starving people might react to typical ...

Sorry about the last nit-pick. it's supposed to be, She clearly was not used to being ignored by men.

Sorry for the bold stuff. my computer kinda acted up

thanks for the review

your review shows how experimental a writer can really get!

you can request reviews in the "will review for food" section.( you don't actually have to give them food btw)

hey! this story is very poetic and lyrical. there's an artistic distinction in the prose which lightened up the whole thing. I like the experimentation which though at first seems ...

actually, this is a follow up to a story i posted some times ago, that's why the title say's #returns#

forgive the typos, i guess i typed it in a rush

for the record: i never did anything like this...

thanks for the suggestions! about the grammar and punctuations...this is actually one of my first tries in poetry and i still have to understand more clearly the concept of verses ...

greetings! you wrote about the classic situation of a girl finding out his man has got lipstick stains and figures he's cheating on her. have to say, really liked your ...