Deleted.

by theoldstoryteller

Published August 29, 2012


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abdullah786
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abdullah786 wrote a review Review · Aug 30, 2012

If this is what you have to submit... no comments.

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Bobbywalker
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Bobbywalker wrote a review Review · Aug 29, 2012

Loved it. The simplicity and the title almost worked together in harmony.

The way the title just says "Deleted", it struck me. How can this be. What was here before. What is it. What was deleted.

It looks like a overview of my thoughts. Everything is so personal, and the title just has to be noted again. I LOVED it.

6/6, Loved it REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY MUCH!

Continue like this and you will be the world's best poetrist. Keep on writing.

Love, Bob Walker!

Shady replied · Aug 30, 2012

You're a nut, Bob Walker. xD

your review shows how experimental a writer can really get!



Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
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