ShakespeareWallah

Hey Myst, Sorry it took me this long to get this done. I'll try to brief. Here goes, So, the start is good and the reader feels that something good ...

Hey there, okay, Though I am not a lover of this genre, I feel that you have a good story. This has potential. Your prose is quite good. this wasn't ...

Hey kat, I'd like to point it out that this is exactly 2323 words and it takes less than nine minutes to read excluding the note on the top. It's ...

Hello there, So this is difficult stuff. Where you planning it to be "surreal"? If not then you have some problems with this. logic problems. # 16 year old kids ...

Greetings!, Quite an interesting piece indeed. Human beings are sheep. This hooked me in. I love this line because it's quite off-beat and has that bizarre complexion to it. The ...

hey Klara, This is amazing. I have no other way to describe it other than that it was beautiful, moving, thought provoking and lovely . grammar I had met someone. ...

Hey Persy, I will make no attempt to review this. This is clearly beyond me. I know I'm direly under qualified to comment but I think it looks more cool ...

Hey Myst, I apologize for the super late review. Anyway let's get down to buisness. Scene 1 , I really don't have any problems here. this part is very good. ...

Hey Myst, This has to be my favorite chp so far. There were two segments and they were complete . You going and telling them will do nothing It kind ...

Hi there, So, the letter's quite interesting. it's actually quite good. And at points you really stood out in portraying the emotions and the frustrations of Lacy. A reason for ...

Hey toboldygo, Now this is good. But is it a short-story? I mean it's not much of a story. All we see here is a rather optimistic guy who wakes ...

Hey toboldygo, Now this is good. But is it a short-story? I mean it it's much of a story. All we see here is a rather optimistic guy who wakes ...

Hey Klara, having read a book about columns, I feel I'm really in the mood for Non-Fiction. So here goes, Aside from some of the technical stuff which Polinka has ...

Hey Night, good stuff you have here. Okay, so I am really liking this piece yet I don't seem to get the vibe that Rachel and Mary are both over ...

Hi there, though I feel that poetry is way beyond me...I thought this was an interesting poem. Honestly, I was drawn in by your reference of the inscrutable editor. loved ...