Shady

Hey Dreamwalker! This is a really passionate poem; it really drew me in and made me feel what you were feeling when you wrote the piece. It's really good. You ...

Hey Sion! I'm surprised this didn't get any reviews yet. It's really good! I really love the word combination you used here; it teased my mind and enticed me to ...

Hey Demib! Your poem is really great! It carried alot of emotion, a thing I admire in a poem. It also has a really good plot; I had never considered ...

Hey World! You reviewed my poetry, so I'm here to do the same for you. You definitely are good a poetry (and at reviews :wink:), You wrote an interesting poem ...

Hey Cspr! You reviewed my work so I'm here to return the favor. Firstly, all of your lines should be capitalized. It's a strange rule that I never have fully ...

Hey Hero! Here as requested! cos I can't handle this simple truth-- ~ When I ran 'cos' through spellchecker it didn't turn red, so I suppose it's technically correct; but ...

Hey Lemony! I'm gonna do a line-by-line critique (as I was led to believe you want), so forgive me if it gets a bit long or nit-picky. As Elipsa’s alarm ...

Hey Lemony! I know this isn't the piece you requested a review for, I just read it for back ground and noticed a few things: “Well, are you going to ...

Hey Amie! Don't really understand the plot, but this is paced nicely and your spelling and grammar are very good! Good job! ~Shady

Hey Yatta! Um...your pace is nice, your spelling and grammar perfect. :D elmo underwear ~ Elmo's a...thing? Don't really know what he is, but he's alive, and a distinct being, ...

Hey Siri! I see you're new here, so welcome! I hope you enjoy your stay here with us. If you need any help, feel free to PM. I like your ...

Hey Puckerman! Firstly, you really should put an age rating on this. There are several younger members on this site, and F-bombs aren't okay for them. sill fuckin living ~ ...

Hey Tara! I see you're new here, so welcome! I hope you enjoy your stay here with us. stare so furously at me. ~ Typo- furiously I can't breath e ...

Hey Nerosys! Sorry I took so long to get here. My life's been crazy lately. Anyway, a disclaimer before I begin: My reviews tend to be slow, line-by-line critiques, so ...

Hey Dude! One review per day...pathetic average, I know...I'm sorry. :/ "She thought to herself about Radi and her own family, wondering what she would have done in the same ...