Stranger

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Dark eyes, full of rage. So unfamilar. A stranger in my wake. They haunt me , taunt me, laugh at me . I have come so obsessesd with the strangers eyes. My heart slows when those intense eyes stare so furously at me. I can't breathe, I can't run away. There's a soul inside those tourcherd eyes that I want to find. The story behind those sad black eyes is buried so deep within. Words so lost, so unknown , A story that needs to be told. But how, when? As the hours fly by , i stare and stare at my strangers eyes. They grow cold . Grown to stone.

I notice the stars falling from my dear strangers eyes, wet with wild emotion. Finally set free from its wood framed cage.

The light comes out and the wooden frame cracks in to small pieces , shattered glass cuts our feet, my stranger and me as we run to the sun. My stranger suddenly stops, mouth open wide, and screams ,of rage, of heart break, of freedom at last, a strange laugh escapes her lips, escapes from me.

My stranger is me.

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Shady wrote a review · Sat Jul 21, 2012 11:29 pm

Hey Tara!

I see you're new here, so welcome! I hope you enjoy your stay here with us.

stare so furously at me.
~ Typo- furiously

I can't breathe


those tourcherd eyes
~ tortured'

The story behide those
~ behind

is buryd so deep within
~ buried

i stare and stare at my stangers
~ 'I' should be capitalized; stranger's

dear stangers eyes
~ stranger's

Finaly set free from
~ Finally

stanger and me as we run to the sun
~ stranger

ecsapes her lips, ecsapes from me.
~ escapes (two offenses here).

~~~

Okay, so your work is interesting, and nicely wrote. Just be sure to run it through spell checker before you post in the future please.

If you need any more help, feel free to PM!

~Shady



The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.
— Sylvia Plath