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Re: Act natural when you find yourself in the middle of a political movement
Hey Puck! Shady here with a review for you tonight. :) Wow. This was pretty impressive. I couldn't find any grammatical/punctuational/spelling errors to complain about, and I generally tear pieces ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Logestella- Prologue
Hey awrmo! Shady here with a review for you this fine night! :D there are two kingdom ’ s . Aside from that, I saw no mechanical errors. Great job! ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Then Unknown Planet: Prologue.
Hey Jordin! Is this the prologue to the story I already reviewed? I don't know! But I'm reviewing it too! :D but the branch had at least done something besides ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Angel of Death
Hey Vybe! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. :D Aside from the formatting issues (I've had this problem myself), your technical stuff is mostly okay. I ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Unknown Planet: Chapter 1.
Hey Jordin! Fellow Green Teamer! :D Your friendly captain here with a review for you this fine evening. That cold day I came home later than I normally did . ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Come with me
Hey Riana! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. :) I like this. It's a good, hopeful, carefree poem, and I like the morale behind it-- very ...
Mar 28, 2013 -
Re: Some Poems (First Poems hehehe)
Hey Gin! Shady here with an attempted review. I don't venture into the poetry side of reviewing much, but I'll give it my best shot! :D I'll split my comments ...
Mar 17, 2013 -
Re: The Diaries Of A Tortured Soul
Hey Toe! Shady here to make an attempt at a review. Wow. I actually understood this poem. I'm slightly shocked-- the meaning of poems tend to go right over my ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: Rovaalian. Chapter 4: Fetching Water
Hey Ethri! Shady here with high expectations for this newest chapter! :D And today was just another day that Rovaalian had to rise early to stop merchants on the road, ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: Rovaalian. Chapter 3: Merciless.
Hey Ethri! It seems I haven't read this chapter yet. I'll correct that, and then move on to your new chapter. :D Something else will eat them, he thought, more ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: Short Prologue and beginning of Chapter 1
Hey Jar! Shady here with your review! :) If I am here to tell you this story . It doesn't mean that I have survived, only that I have lived ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: Guide
Hey joran! Welcome again to YWS! I'm Shady, and I'll be attempting a review on your poem this fine day. :) I like the idea behind this poem, it's nice. ...
Mar 11, 2013 -
Re: Danielle and Rebecca's test.
Probes! You posted! I'm so happy! :D :o Rebecca. I can't believe she's doing that. It's so cold. xP "10 more feet. Just 10 more feet!" I thought furiously. ~ ...
Mar 8, 2013 -
Re: Deleted
Hey Anda! Shady here with your review. :) I sighed frustratedly when I realized all I'd writen was "Once upon a time," That saying always started the happy stories and ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: You tell me.
'Ello Spinelli, Shady here with your review. :) I agree with Pengu entirely with her review. This isn't really a narrative, and it's a bit hard to read. I think ...
Mar 7, 2013
