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Shady

"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Act natural when you find yourself in the middle of a political movement

    Hey Puck! Shady here with a review for you tonight. :) Wow. This was pretty impressive. I couldn't find any grammatical/punctuational/spelling errors to complain about, and I generally tear pieces ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Logestella- Prologue

    Hey awrmo! Shady here with a review for you this fine night! :D there are two kingdom ’ s . Aside from that, I saw no mechanical errors. Great job! ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Then Unknown Planet: Prologue.

    Hey Jordin! Is this the prologue to the story I already reviewed? I don't know! But I'm reviewing it too! :D but the branch had at least done something besides ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: The Angel of Death

    Hey Vybe! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. :D Aside from the formatting issues (I've had this problem myself), your technical stuff is mostly okay. I ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Unknown Planet: Chapter 1.

    Hey Jordin! Fellow Green Teamer! :D Your friendly captain here with a review for you this fine evening. That cold day I came home later than I normally did . ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Other Re: Come with me

    Hey Riana! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. :) I like this. It's a good, hopeful, carefree poem, and I like the morale behind it-- very ...

    Mar 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Some Poems (First Poems hehehe)

    Hey Gin! Shady here with an attempted review. I don't venture into the poetry side of reviewing much, but I'll give it my best shot! :D I'll split my comments ...

    Mar 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: The Diaries Of A Tortured Soul

    Hey Toe! Shady here to make an attempt at a review. Wow. I actually understood this poem. I'm slightly shocked-- the meaning of poems tend to go right over my ...

    Mar 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Rovaalian. Chapter 4: Fetching Water

    Hey Ethri! Shady here with high expectations for this newest chapter! :D And today was just another day that Rovaalian had to rise early to stop merchants on the road, ...

    Mar 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Rovaalian. Chapter 3: Merciless.

    Hey Ethri! It seems I haven't read this chapter yet. I'll correct that, and then move on to your new chapter. :D Something else will eat them, he thought, more ...

    Mar 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Satire Re: Short Prologue and beginning of Chapter 1

    Hey Jar! Shady here with your review! :) If I am here to tell you this story . It doesn't mean that I have survived, only that I have lived ...

    Mar 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Guide

    Hey joran! Welcome again to YWS! I'm Shady, and I'll be attempting a review on your poem this fine day. :) I like the idea behind this poem, it's nice. ...

    Mar 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Danielle and Rebecca's test.

    Probes! You posted! I'm so happy! :D :o Rebecca. I can't believe she's doing that. It's so cold. xP "10 more feet. Just 10 more feet!" I thought furiously. ~ ...

    Mar 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Deleted

    Hey Anda! Shady here with your review. :) I sighed frustratedly when I realized all I'd writen was "Once upon a time," That saying always started the happy stories and ...

    Mar 16, 2013
  • Other » Literature, Narrative Re: You tell me.

    'Ello Spinelli, Shady here with your review. :) I agree with Pengu entirely with her review. This isn't really a narrative, and it's a bit hard to read. I think ...

    Mar 7, 2013


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