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Re: Obsessive Compulsive Disorder.
Hey mazerette, Shady here with a review for you this fine day! This is a really interesting piece. I don't have OCD, but it's very informative and eye-opening. I know ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 7
Hey Moalex, Shady here to rescue your story from the Green Room! I've not read any of the previous chapters so forgive me if I don't understand something. According to ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Magician's Wars Chapter 2
Hey kman, Shady here with a review to rescue your story from the Green Room ;) I quickly broke away from her and ran to the other side of the ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Magician's Wars Chapter 1
Hey kman, Shady here with a review for you this fine day! I was going to review your second chapter that's stuck in the Green Room, but I wanted to ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 7 - A Dance to Remember
Hey Murphy, Shady back for a review on the final bit you've posted so far! I have never been drugged before, but I have the feeling that is exactly what ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 6 - Monsters of the Night
Hey Murphy, Shady back for another review! He holds me with one arm and opens the passenger door to a black BMW convertible and sit me down. The grammar seems ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 5 - Twisted Stories
Hey Murphy, Shady here again to rescue another one from the Green Room ;) I honestly don't have much to say about this chapter, either. I think this novel is ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 3 - Why
Hey Murphy, Shady here again! Let's get started... I bare it in silent revulsion. Minor grammar nitpick, but this is the wrong use of the word. "Bare" means uncovered, like ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 2 - Taken
Hey Murphy, Shady back with another review for you! "You're crazy!" I exclaim, shock evident on my face. This is another of those "tell" vs "show" things I mentioned in ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Chosen
Hey Murphy, Shady here again! Out of all the men in my life he is my favorite. The way he takes care of me when I am drunk as ****, ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 4 - Deadly Encounters
Hey Murphy! Shady here with a review for you! I haven't read the previous chapters, but it looks like this work could use a bit of rescuing from the Green ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: Are you really my brother, brother?
Hey Radrook, Shady here with a quick review for you! :) I thought this was a really interesting idea, and I think you did a really good job expressing your ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: First Mission: Part 1 (Script Style)
Hey Jimms, Shady here with a review for you! First of all, I thought it was interesting you did this in script style. Is there a reason you did it ...
Jan 16, 2018 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 1 - The Message and the Mission (Part 1)
Egs! You talking of how long it's been since you've written kinda reminded me how long it's been since I've reviewed. So I figured we could come together and help ...
Aug 18, 2016 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Four
Hey Crystal! Shady back with another review! :D “Due per due .” W e get into her Ferrari and we are off. “Hai intenzione di ballare?” asks Ales. ~ Make ...
Dec 30, 2015