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Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 9)
Scribs! I'm back! I think this will likely be a short review, but guess we'll see. Let's go... According to Risto, it would be raining tomorrow. Who is Risto? I ...
Sep 26, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 8)
SCRIBS! I BE BACK! She could still see the blood. The incision on the back of her wrist was only beginning to heal, scabbing over until it was itchy and ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 7)
Scribs! I am going to try to use your novel for my last three Checklists (Chapters 10, 15, and 20) so expect a BUNCH of reviews from me soon if ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 6.2)
Scribberzini! I'm back! And I'm excited! Definitely didn't just notice that I only call you mel when I'm sick xD stave off the chill of the rescinding cold. The chill ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 6.1)
Heya mel, Shady here with a review for you today! It'll probably be on the shorter side because I'm not feeling great today, but alas, Team Tortoisers press on ;) ...
Sep 20, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 5)
Give exclusively grammatical feedback, got it! ;) Jk! Super excited for some Ember perspectives let's get started... “Swords suck, there are other weapons that aren’t a bow. That’s so unexciting
Sep 18, 2020 -
Re: I'm really good at photoshop (pt 1)
Sound! Thanks so much for giving me a mystery for my Checklist Challenge! Let's get started... He does not look pleased. This is a bit redundant given the surrounding text ...
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 4.2)
MORE CASSIUS AW YES LET'S GO-- The hallways were bustling with light This word choice feels off? Bustling gives me the feel of like people pushing past -- it's physical ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 4.1)
OMG CASSIUS YES! We got so much Cassius from the other perspectives I forgot I haven't gotten his POV yet but I am HERE for it! He should be focusing ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 3.2)
Scribs! I was gonna review this last night, but then I got distracted with Checklisting for the Challenge -- BUT I'M BACK NOW also I only have 1 other checklist ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Synonyms
Heya Horisun, Shady here with a quick review for you tonight! I really like this poem! It's lighthearted and amusing, but also you do a really nice job with your ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Is there faithful friend in life?
Heya LOLACONER, Shady here with a review for your poem tonight! Let's get started... Those counseling you on decision..... Can cancel your successful vision, I really like these lines! It's ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: Me Singing
Heya creativityrules, Shady here to review your poem! I know you'll likely never see this, but the Checklist Challenge asked me to come find a piece from March 2012, and ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: An Ode to Winter
Hiya UncleQrow, Shady here with a quick review for your short poem! Rubies are red I like how you mixed this up from the traditional "roses are red" poem bit ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: Clouds of music and Roads of joy.
Heya MoonIris, Shady here with a quick review for you this fine evening! Let's get started... I’m laying in bed, my music is loud, but only I can hear it. ...
Sep 14, 2020
