Shadowhunter14

Hey! So I really liked this poem, the concept and premise seems very interesting - it's very fascinating that you wrote through your character's eyes, maybe I should try that ...

Wow! This was really awesome, really clever and it got you thinking. It seemed quite philosophical to me! And the title and beginning lines really grabbed you. Fantastic! I think ...

Hey qaralynn :) Nice to see you around! On an irrelevant note - how do you pronounce your username? Is it Cara-lin? That's how I've been saying it :D This ...

Hello amygabb - glad to see you put something else up! I should really do the same soon :/ I loved the idea of this poem, and how you personified ...

Hey! It's me again, to review the next part of your story :) So this was really good, as expected. I liked the way you revealed some of the back ...

Hey amygabb it's me again :) So this was a great idea to write a poem about. Insomnia sort of fascinates me, although it's pretty unpleasant to experience. Anyhow, it's ...

Hey! It's me Shadowhunter, and I don't usually review lyrics, but I thought I'd read this, and I'm glad I did! I know who FLorence Welch is even though the ...

Hey! You knew to YWS? Cool that you've posted something already :) First of all, wow. This was really good!!! I got gripped from the first line and you kept ...

I really liked this too :) A very hurried review, so not really any criticism - yeah, one of my favourite book serieses is inspired by Paradise Lost, and it ...

Hey! I thought that this poem was really very good! Good title and it had a great meaning behind it, as the other reviewers pointed out. I shall now attempt ...

Hey! First review, whoo! First of all, I really enjoyed this! Provided me with some really rich, great imagery. It sounds just like something I'd write! In my opinion this ...

Wow! Awesome poem! Very eerie, but very beautiful. Gripped me right from the start! Loved the title too, dark and enticing. Something evil in the corner, maybe omit this comma ...

Hi! It's Shadowhunter! You're new aren't you? Is this your first submission? First of all, I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed this poem. I felt that the ...

Hey :) I'm a bit like you, a big fan of fantasy/supernatural fan :) I've read my fair share of Young Adult paranormal books too, although nowadays I feel as ...

Wow! That was quite dark! The reason that I clicked on this poem in the whole forum was because the subtitle was "this could be disturbing to some" (or whatever ...