ShadowKnight155

Hm. I liked it. At times it's a little hard to understand and such. Clarification would be nice, but I think you can retain a good amount of mystery in ...

I just read the ending because I was short on time, and wow, it makes me really want to read the full thing. Hopefully I'll remember to later. The ending ...

I liked it, the flow could use some work, but if I got things correctly, you're talking about racism? Correct? My schools doing an annoying crackdown, but it's really just ...

Very true, again. Your poetry is so simple, yet so honest and true. That's why I love it. I'll get right to the point, though. I need a place for ...

Simply...terrible! I threw up on my comput--you said you wanted harshness... Just kidding. I totally agree. Is it possible to be yourself Dress and live like no one else Or ...

Yes...yes...very interesting! ;9 I will try to do a real review hear. First I'll start technical: (that's an easy one. not rich, not poor) "not rich. note poor" needs capitalization(like ...

Maybe(in the first stanza), "Although I wish..." instead of "I wish." The I wish just makes it seemed like your insulting zombies at first. Other than that, you made my ...

"Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things" I second that. Just found out first hand, I guess... I disagree with Snoink, though. I can imagine some cute girl giggling and saying that ...

Liked. I liked it, regardless if I can relate. I didn't see anything really wrong. I can't relate because...because...well, I'm a nerd. If I was in science class I'd be ...

Your poem had great flow. It was great. I disagree with ehte92, the cruel and brutal do work. I think the repetition was done rather well. And I'm sure on ...

The exclamations are okay, but they can be removed, however, it might be necessary without posting audio. Keep all the commas, they show when pitch changes and all that. I ...

For once I got passive Imagery. Just reading this put pictures in my head, and normally I'm so disembodied that I really need to make something in my head. Meaning ...

Take the F word out of the middle stanza, there. It didn't fit with me, but I really liked it used in the other two stanzas. Keep writing, press on. ...

I liked it, but I wish I didn't. The emotions you express are ones I resent, as the past is bleak, yet I clammer to it as they were happy ...

At a full sprint, arms shielding his face, Nathanial crashed through a pane of plate Glass block or like mini panes? glass window and into the embassy’s main lobby, much ...