ShadowHunter

I don't really read much poetry, so I'm only going to review the basics and such, here goes! The poem has a very Romeo and Juliet feel to it, especially ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was heartfelt and heartwarming. I only have a few nitpicks about some of the sentences and the flow of the story. "Lest you ...

This story was great! I loved the plot line and it is an interesting idea. The main character is fine in my opinion, perfect people are not fun to read ...

I love the show Sherlock, and I think you are doing it justice. I loved how Sherlock was friends with Moriarty when they were kids. The one thing that I ...

I liked how you made the characters more human in this part. Instead of making Jordan the major creep and blackmailer, you gave him real life problems. I lie how ...

This section is great! I loved how your character interacted with her parents and how the parents interacted with Jordan. There is not much for me to say here, I ...

This story is getting better and better every time I read it. I love the character developments that you are adding in here and there. I like how you played ...

This story was so-so in my mind, the idea and bones for a great story where there, it's just that some of the execution fell a bit short, let me ...

This was an interesting read. I was interested by the fact that it dealt with clones and I liked how you gave them all the same name, but put numbers ...

This was really deep. I liked how you went into human nature by saying that some days we ignore people, and the next day we can't get enough of them. ...

I loved this story, the imagery was perfect. I liked how most of the story took place in her dream world instead of her real life, telling about the dream, ...

Wow, that was amazing. Your descriptions were fantastic and you never tried to overload my scenes, you left somethings up to the imagination. My only complaint about this work was ...

I absolutely adore your story! There were only a few minor errors in the story, like when you said "Wow my thoughts were so morbid." I'm not positive if you ...

This story has great potential, it's just a tad bit hard to follow at times. For instance, while I was reading thee last paragraph, I kept scratching my head because ...

Wow, I am seriously blown away by this. It was fantastic, but it felt more like the prologue of a book that a short story. The "Until now." part seemed ...