SereneSimpliciT

The answer is love, definitely. I mean, it's a romantic poem for crying out loud XD Anywho, unlike dragonfphoenix, I actually like the 1st line pointed out. It's a more ...

Alright...this doesn't make all that much sense. I mean, I get where you're going with the idea of internal pain, but it gets sort of confusing as the poem continues. ...

This sounds like something I would write to be perfectly honest XD I like the emotion throughout this, it keeps a steady balance of happy, which in these tends to ...

Alright, that was cute. I will admit that. I wish that there was a way on here so that the reader could actually hear the song while they're reading the ...

Can I just say that I love you? Honestly, I'm in a not so chipper mood at the moment, but as I read this, I felt my unhappiness fade little ...

Well...that was rather depressing XD I've never reviewed anything this short, so sorry if this is short as well LOL Now then, I adore the free verse *free-verse poet myself* ...

...What the... Well that was unexpected At first, I thought that this would be one of those cheesy Christmas poems, but it continued, it got more...and more...dark...until the kid actually ...

...Huh? Wh...What the heck just happened? I thought this was a romantic story...when it's just a guy having a conversation with random people about a party. Why doesn't he ever ...

This is my first review on a song ^^ In my opinion, this is a very beautiful song, the words are very warm and sweet, and the way it continues, ...

Amen to that first line! If you don't try, to find cute guys! XD Ok, sorry, I had to comment on that LOL Omg....I was in tears at the end! ...

That so flawless. It gets across point and the resolution with no misleading information, it's just nice, simple, short and to the point. This is actually one of the longer ...

Please put the bottom part in parentheses. It takes away from my poem Sorry, I just wanted to get that out before I started, because it's a nice piece, but ...

...Ok then... LOL omg, I have never read a poem this...creepy. I mean, this just made me very uncomfortable and made my skin crawl. Even Poe doesn't make me feel ...

Alright...I've never really seen an outline such as this before, so in terms of comparing, I have nothing to compare this to LOL All in all, this sounds like an ...

I can see easily from this that you are a free verse poet, and I personally really like it. I grew up learning the boring rhyming stuff and had it ...