Seraphinaxx

Hey, Sarah here for a review. I liked your use of humour in this piece. It was less straight out funny and more pure absurdity, which is a style I ...

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Hey, Sarah here for a review. I liked your use of humour in this piece. It was less straight out funny and more pure absurdity, which is a style I ...

Sarah here for a review. :) I have a confession to make. I would've had no idea this was a fanfiction if you hadn't stated that it was. The world ...

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Sarah here for a review. :) I have a confession to make. I would've had no idea this was a fanfiction if you hadn't stated that it was. The world ...

Sarah here for a review. Reading this at 2am probably wasn't a great idea. I found this absolutely terrifying. You did a great job of setting up the atmosphere before ...

This is really sad :( I personally spent two years of my life with a massive crush on a friend who never thought of me in that way. Granted, it's ...

Wow, those two last words were a great ending. I love the irony of how the original story is about a fall from perfection, but you ended your story with ...

OMG OMG OMG *FANGIRLS LIKE CRAZY* THIS IS AMAZING!!!! Ok, I think I'm calm now. I honestly think I love Doctor Who and Sherlock too much to properly critique this, ...

"I hate love stories. Always have, always will. But I suppose that's what this is. A love story" Just two sentences, eighteen words. But they really do give a good ...

I like this. It started off slowly with the description, setting the stage almost, and the introducing the characters. Both the characters had really distinct personalities and the interactions betwee

I'm not really sure what was going on here. Therefore this review is going to take the form of my interpretation of this poem. Here goes: Paragraph one: So the ...

Hi and welcome to YWS. I personally enjoyed this story a lot. It's well written, with a great idea behind it. I have seen a few stories about people with ...

Awwwww this made me feel really sad :( Don't take that as an insult though. It means you managed to get me attached to your main character and hoping she'd ...

Firstly, thank you for explaining something I've always wondered. Secondly, this is a beautiful piece of writing. You manage to make it sound depressed in the first paragraph, then hopeful ...

This is a wonderful piece of writing. The conflict the narrator is feeling is so obvious and in the end it doesn't give you a clear answer. You can feel ...