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Sariah
I'm not exactly sure what kind of genre this is. I took it from the Book of Mormon, so... religous fiction....? I thougth that it would be an interesting little ...
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Songwood
This is the first 4 pages of my story. I don't know what else to say ^-^v I opened my eyes, taking in my new surroundings at once. I could ...
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Songwood.. again
Sorry about the spacing everyone.-.-" This is the fisrt part of my story. I opened my eyes, taking in my new surroundings at once. I could see that I was ...
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The Seraph Tree
Having a bit of writer's block with Songwood, so I was working on some of my other stuff. Tell me what you think ^-^ ~*~ “There’s no use trying to ...
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Jerrsea'ya: Wind of Death
Um, this is one of my earlier stories, so I know that I repeat and do all that crud... so... ^-^V have fun. Oh, just a warning, I might have ...
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Jerrsea'ya: Wind of death part I
Sorry everybody. I'm still kind of new to this -.-" I'll post it in parts. Thanks for warning me. X( A small boy sat in the snow next to the ...
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Songwood part II
This is the next part. ^-^v “How sweet of you, Atlanta.” A thread of confusion meandered into the blank of my mind. Atlanta? Why had he called me that? This ...
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Jerrsea'ya: Wind of Death part I
A small boy sat in the snow next to the softening stream, dozing slightly. The silence made it impossible to ignore the aurora’s reflection on the frozen stream. Break up ...
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Songwood part II
I changed some of it towards the end. Please tell me what you think >> “How sweet of you, Atlanta.” A thread of confusion meandered into the blank of my ...
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Jerrsea'ya: Wind of Death part II
^^^ Iistengel opened his eyes and looked around. It had to be dawn. He always woke at dawn. Then why am I so tired? He thought, rubbing his eyes irritably. ...
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Not sure what to call this :)
Uh......... not sure what to call it, but it is fantasy, I promise ^o^V Nova jerked up, banging her head on the low ceiling. That stupid dream is going to ...
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Uh.. Don't know what to call it part II?? :D
Not sure about the flow... but then, only dead fish go with the flow.... *** Horsa and his little lectures. Nova rolled her eyes, blowing her hair out of her ...
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Jerrsea'ya Wind of Death: Part III
Sorry that it's taken so long... been busy and lazy. :D:D:D:D Not sure how it is. It sounds a little choppy. *** Iistengel turned away in disgust as the other ...
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Amarok
Please crit :D:D:D:D:D ** “You killed my horse.” The unicorn looked up at her, licking it’s chops. Liesl gazed back, painfully aware of the creature’s predatory eyes. It yawned, then ...
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Letters to Raven
Raven- How are you? It’s been a while since I’ve seen you. Me, well… you don’t want to know. Sorry, not in a very good mood. I’d rather not go ...
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Letters to Raven: II
Hi Raven. Why do you always ask how I am? I always tell you I’m good. I didn’t talk to my X today. I’m trying to stay away from him. ...
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The Thorn
The Thorn * She is lovely, the thorn in my side. She keeps me from slipping by the wayside. * Through the storms of life, We pass together Bound with ...
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Sparrow
Sparrow ** Many wander the path, You think you tread alone. Don’t conceal this wrath- Don’t stumble on this stone. * Many drift, many are lost- The sea of life ...
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Death scene: Zebra
As stated, this is for Author13's contest. I'm not sure how the last few paragraphs are, so.................. yes. Have fun! :D:D:D I looked up from my book, puzzled by the ...
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Are you going to eat me?
I know this needs a lot of work. The problem is, I can't see what to do with it. Possibly more description. The question "Are you going to eat me?" ...
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Step through the glass, Alice
Well, this is sort of a random/blah/whatever idea I'm messing around with. I like it, but it feels like there's something missing. >
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Prologue to Eir's Dream part 1
This is one of my favorite things I've written; so I'm doing this YESNO kind of thing about crits. Obviously the yes won. Prologue *** “Quickly, in here.” Silvani shoved ...
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Prologue to Eir's Dream part 2
I realize there are some parts in here that don't make sense; the part where Silvani starts killing people, some of the descriptions of her when she transforms... etc. I ...
